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Unread 12-13-2013   #1
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New Short Story: Control

I'd been sitting on this short story idea for a while, and I finally got around to completing it. It was a challenging departure from my normal style, being a bit more serious in subject matter and bigger in the GTS. I think I'm happy with the results though. Feedback encouraged!

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Pretty damn good. I love your stuff :-)
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Honestly I think this is good enough of just a story that if you cleaned up some of the language (like tits :P) you could probably submit this to a publication.
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Honestly I think this is good enough of just a story that if you cleaned up some of the language (like tits :P) you could probably submit this to a publication.
Thanks! I'd probably try to keep at least one "tits" in there. I tend to go overboard with that word, since it is awfully fun to use ;-)
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Thanks! I'd probably try to keep at least one "tits" in there. I tend to go overboard with that word, since it is awfully fun to use ;-)
I don't have a problem with it, but someone like the New Yorker might :P
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