Dress Up

merritstone · 03-06-2007

A sexy goth girl experiments with a Reducing Spell in the hopes of getting a brand new wardrobe. The results not being exactly what she might have expected.

The source material is from a SuicideGirls GTS series previously posted. I gained a devious pleasure to turn a GTS into a SW... not that there's anything wrong with a lovely GTS, but doesn't she make a cute SW?

bigboy83 · 03-06-2007

not bad, but it needs work.

Blackbat · 03-06-2007

i really lik it, very gd work!!!

qzar9999 · 03-06-2007

Needs work? Huh? What?

The only "work" this needs is to be turned into a longer sequence. Or maybe a sequel where that spell gets used on another girl.

Merrittstone, this is really good.

LK · 03-06-2007

Hot damn. Excellent job, but the shoes didn't get bigger! ;_; Kidding, great job man.

TrunKated · 03-06-2007

This is EXTREMELY relevant to my interests. Excellent job.

5 stars *****.

Please post a sequel. And another and another.

Etc.

And thanks!

wolfman-al · 03-06-2007

Great!
Now that what I´m talking about. Please continiue it, make her smaller!

03-06-2007

Nice work

mr small · 03-07-2007

Nice work! Always glad to see new shrinking material.

merritstone · 03-07-2007

Thanks for the comments. I appreciate them.

Quote:

Originally Posted by bigboy83

not bad, but it needs work.

I appreciate a critique, but this one has no direction or suggestions and is therefore useless. I happen to agree with your general statement. This was done for fun, but had I created this for work it would've never made the grade (for a variety of reasons). Given infinite time I know what I would've done differently... but I would like to hear what you think 'needs work'.

Max AP · 03-07-2007

Excellent sequence and funny story Merritstone. Being a doll's doll. Now that is ironic. LOL

Max

guitarro · 03-09-2007

Holy Crap

That Was Great

03-06-2007	#4
qzar9999 Purveyor of Porn Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gallifrey Posts: 7,064	Needs work? Huh? What? The only "work" this needs is to be turned into a longer sequence. Or maybe a sequel where that spell gets used on another girl. Merrittstone, this is really good. __________________ Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything.

03-06-2007	#5
LK Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 3,258	Hot damn. Excellent job, but the shoes didn't get bigger! ;_; Kidding, great job man. __________________

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TrunKated AKA Kaytie. NOT Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In my house. Posts: 5,597	This is EXTREMELY relevant to my interests. Excellent job. 5 stars ****. Please post a sequel. And another and another. Etc. And thanks! Last edited by TrunKated; 04-23-2008 at 06:48 AM.*

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wolfman-al Electric Frankfurter Join Date: May 2005 Location: Frankfurt, darkest Germany Posts: 1,835	Great! Now that what I´m talking about. Please continiue it, make her smaller! __________________ I see dumb people... My comic: www.airpatrolonline.net

03-07-2007	#9
mr small Obsesser Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 338	Nice work! Always glad to see new shrinking material. __________________ "May A Moody Baby Doom A Yam?"

03-06-2007	#2
bigboy83 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 323	not bad, but it needs work.

03-06-2007	#3
Blackbat SW Gentleman Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: UK Posts: 541	i really lik it, very gd work!!!

03-07-2007	#11
Max AP Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 495	Excellent sequence and funny story Merritstone. Being a doll's doll. Now that is ironic. LOL Max

03-09-2007	#12
guitarro Process Fan Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 51	Holy Crap That Was Great