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Unread 06-21-2014   #13
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)

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Page 1 &2 are good!
Page 2 where the shrinking starts she has the face expression between "noticed that she is shrinking" and worrying.
So far so good!

Page 3 ,however, has just the "okay, I'm shrinking" face expression.
Someone who is shrinking and who never experienced something like that before, should be worried, confused, puzzled, or a a mix of all these feelings.
She knows its happening but know that she can't do anything about it.
Or she is not capable to understand the situation.

At page 3 bottom pic, her eyes are shut.
For me it looks like that she is pissed off rather than being embarrassed.

These are my suggestions what could be improved.
Hope it was helpful.

Greetings

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Yeah I think the problem is I didn't want to zoom in too much to make the shrinking more apparent, so the facial expression is not as clear as it could be. I was hoping the high soft curved eye brows would look less like an annoyed expression but I guess not? xD Thanks for the feed back though, next time I'll be way more prepared.

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Also, page 5! http://fav.me/d7e3das

My first time doing a hand held shrunken girl, I hope I got it right. xD
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)

I have complete confidence that her host is telling the absolute truth and isn't hiding anything at all.
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)

Page 6: http://fav.me/d7lf7ij

I always loved the combination of shrinking + BE, maybe I'm weird? xD
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)

I like the series so far. Wonder what her boss has in store for her next.

Nicely done, and thanks for sharing.
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)

Soooo....

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How does one go about fiddling with those proportion files for 3DCG~?
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)

Page 7: http://fav.me/d7eiit5
Page 8: http://fav.me/d7f75k9

I'm really enjoying the BE/shrinking mix. Hope you all like.
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Re: Angela's first day (My new series.)

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