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Unread 07-12-2017   #3001
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Limerick has a new title out: The Girls in Dorm 3B. It's a slightly different take on the college campus virus storyline, but has shades of Endorphins thanks to the enclosed nature of setting a narrative within a dorm. I do appreciate the sort of flashback-esque structuring to prevent the work from going in the direction of a straight-narrative, though. Limerick is one of the few prose writers who I think could really successfully integrate the erotica with varying forms of storytelling and prose styles, so I'm happy to see him to continue to play around.

According to MCStories May was the tenth anniversary of What You've Done For Me. I am blown over and in complete admiration that Limerick's kept his little world going for so long. I think it is definitely time for a re-read soon, especially as we come up on the tenth anniversary of some other favorites of mine next year, like Backwash and Business Casual, Endorphins, Calving Signs, A(ci)dmission, Careers in Science and The Man in Room Ten.

Holy shit, a lot of the big stories were written in 2008. O.o
Thanks Gatoh. I did peak in 2008.

Dorm 3B is written as a tribute to the structure in Cristina's Mounten & Mayne. It's vaguely a Calving Signs story, to the extent that it matters.

It is really hard to come up with original ideas lately!
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Unread 07-12-2017   #3002
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The last original story was probably told by cavemen sitting around a fire. I wouldn't worry about it.
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Unread 07-13-2017   #3003
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My two favorites of your stories are Endorphins (from 2008) and Let It Happen (from late 2013), so I certainly don't think you're in a rut! In fact, would love to see you visit the latter universe again sometime.

Thanks for your many, many awesome stories over the years.

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Unread 07-13-2017   #3004
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"Retail" and "Firehose" are my two personal faves.
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Unread 07-16-2017   #3005
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Thanks Gatoh. I did peak in 2008.

Dorm 3B is written as a tribute to the structure in Cristina's Mounten & Mayne. It's vaguely a Calving Signs story, to the extent that it matters.

It is really hard to come up with original ideas lately!
Mounten & Mayne is such a good one. Cristina Prince hasn't posted in quite a while (at least on MCStories) so I've missed her work. It boggles my mind with what she was able to accomplish with Thick Country Sluts and Kitty and Cammi in Church Country. There's a density to her stories that really does scoop up the reader in a sort of fuck haze. Your two styles are actually quite different, but still on the same level of prowess.

Coming up with original ideas can indeed be a pain. I've been tossing around an idea for a while myself, but every time I get through it partially I hit a wall because I wind up getting to the action too soon and jumping from A to B to Q.

Personally speaking, as a fan of your work, I'd love to see more in the vain of AgraRipe. It felt like a return to your strong-suit of workplace and school settings after a string of smaller settings, which naturally allow for a story to grow into a behemoth-length work. Not to say I don't love your smaller works--Mating and Breeding had me on the edge of my seat!--but the long-form stories are where it truly feels like one can invest themselves.

Speaking of Calving Signs, that story is definitely the story of yours I have reread the most. Combing bimbos with pregnancy is a dastardly combination, especially when it leaves a writer with the ability to give us a natural point to check in on a character some time after the main storyline concludes. I can't believe it took me so long to read Slut TV. If I had known there was a sort of return of Calving Signs there I would have hopped on it much sooner.

I agree with AlphaMatrix about Retail being a favorite. You definitely captured the strange world of retail perfectly and managed to even surmise an appropriate bimbofication of it. You see a lot of weird shit in the retail world, so it's pretty satisfying to see it stricken by a bimbo virus.

Your collaborations with Dynamoob are also some of my favorites. I definitely enjoyed Buck's Bimbos and The Bimbo Merchant for how your switched mediums a little by playing through the interactive structure of a blog. PerfectU similarly did well by sort of developing and perfecting a visual element to the fictional blog, so combining your two talents in that manner was a great idea. I was happy to see Buck's Bimbos come to fruition after enjoying Dynamoob's take on Travel Buddies so much. I definitely hope to see you two collaborate again in the future. Maybe on a take on AgraRipe? Or perhaps a more simpler to render world, like Mating and Breeding?

Speaking of AgraRipe, how did you feel about toe-dipping into the world of TG transformation? Was the response what you were hoping for?

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Unread 08-06-2017   #3006
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Cammy bimboed by Chun Li

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Unread 09-01-2017   #3007
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Limerick/ederin has done it yet again with The Cum Shot! I continue to be blown away by the prose and personality Limerick brings to his zany worlds by treating them with both humor and sincerity. The best thing about art, especially the ones out of the mainstream, are their capacity for just plain sincere expressions of will: the will to make curvy, fuck-worthy bimbos, in this case. The 'co-workers' and 'small town' elements are continually a winning formula for Limerick, but I'm particularly pleased by how the small changes in your modus operandi changes from story to story.

Tying Kylie's ethnicity into how institutionalized porn genres have become is a simple, but fulfilling jab. Typically you fall back in the tried-and-true Korean girl, but using the Cambodian ethnicity here ties stronger to the wealth of continental Asian porn out there. For a story all about what would happen if the real world was merged with porn it is very central to be able to tie the pre-bimbofied character into the forthcoming porn tag-ification, so I'm very happy with what you did with Kylie. In fact, I was also intrigued by how you delved into the homogenization of the character. 'Asian' is such a generic tag with only the occasional deviation on websites into 'Japanese', so I was impressed by how you lampshaded this by having Kylie lose her identity as 'Cambodian' and think of herself as 'Asian', further re-enforcing this by having her skin complexion change. This is exciting as it exists as an almost 'alternate flavor' of bimbofication. Bravo, my good sir. If I have one complaint about Kylie it was that her name already felt so...bimbo-esque. Then again, I suppose she was already pretty much a bimbo at heart before the transformation commenced, but I always prefer to see that 'name change' element! Objectively-speaking, I think I really just wanted her to take a new and more 'ethnic' name. 'Kylie' is too damned American White Girl Next Door for its own good.

Speaking of names, 'Tessa' sounds like both the most stuck-up and the most unrefined, 'porno name' name I've ever heard and I was thrilled the second her character was introduced. "Yup, she's going to be a fuckin' porn bimbo!" I feel like you could have maybe even taken the pre-bimboficatiom snobbishness further considering her name made the character so ripe for corruption, but alas, you had quite a bit on your plate already.

I also enjoyed how you brought back the use of a prologue/epilogue character to begin and round out the story. It reminded me of Business Casual, one of my favorite of your titles, in how Mr. Rod is there in the beginning and then again at the very end. It's a simple effect that makes the world seem...larger, really. A nostalgic seasoning to make the long-time reader feel like they've come home to a big family reunion for Big Daddy's eightieth birthday or something. Just...thanks. Victor's simple, quiet, matter-of-fact preference for porn sets him a part as a 'smaller' personality than Mr. Rod, but damn it, he was a quaint son of a bitch and for that I salute him.

While I'm at it, I swear I've heard 'Doctor Hardrod' as a name somewhere before. I just can't remember where...

As always, I'm looking forward to your next masterpiece. I'm definitely interested in seeing you play around more and more with transformation outside of straight-up bimbofication. I don't know how you really felt about the gender-bender in AgraRipe, but it definitely had me--as a fan of the subject and your style--interested. I think I'd like to see you delve back into one of your other old subjects and play with family settings again, but that's just me as a fan speaking.

I think I'm going to try to find the time to re-read Retail. I may or may not work in the field, so I'd like to take a look at it and see if anything sounds like a perversion of the sort of thing I actually experience. I love your small, run-down business workplace stories as much as your small, struggling business office stories, so it'll be interesting to sort of dive back into the former. Speaking of which, it just occurred to me that there should be some nice material to get out of another mall story. Watching the Dead Mall series on YouTube has really driven me to think about how well those sights fit the descriptions in some of your works. It really reinvigorates my passion for your work, oddly enough!

Maybe I'll try to get around to working on some of my own ideas for erotic stories...

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Unread 09-01-2017   #3008
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I think somebody likes your work, Lim:P
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Unread 09-02-2017   #3009
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I think somebody likes your work, Lim:P
It can't be helped, tiddies and bimbos make me hard.
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Unread 09-02-2017   #3010
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What, you can't just pray it away?
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What, you can't just pray it away?
You mean replace my love of fiction for a reliance on another [potential] kind of fiction? Heavens, no.
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Unread 09-03-2017   #3012
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It can't be helped, tiddies and bimbos make me hard.
Thanks Gatoh! And thanks to Zuralistic for the idea. I think this is the first time I've used someone else's concept.
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