Persona 4 Interactive WG stories.

[Vfanatic]

I've recently found through a series of DeviantART searches a long series of interactive Weight Gain stories about Shin Megami Tensei Persona 4. Now I read a lot of the varying plot lines and enjoy writing about Weight Gain so I decided to join and contribute, now I'm not very popular on DA so I can't get a lot of feedback there so I was wondering/hoping I could get some here.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...ecent_chapters This is the recent chapters, you may need to read from the beginning to understand, but hopefully you won't mind.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...action/outline Just in case you want this to help.

Pre-complaints acknowledgment: Yes I know there are some spelling errors, some times I typed in words that are spelled correctly and similar to a word I wanted to use like "Has" and "Had" simple mistake. Also I'm well awake that my character actions suck, I describe very little of what is going on and leave you to imagine the rest, I am sorry. Lastly if a plot element sucks then mention it I'll explain more about it if I can, some things you just need willing suspension of disbelief.

If anyone wishes to join in on these interactive stories feel free to add onto it, this whole thing is a new experience for me and I welcome it. If you have seen these, well there's something new now

Last but not least I apologize if this thread has been made before.

Edit: Oops I made a boo boo, when making a chapter for The Yukiko and the Magic Book storyline I accidentally forgot to add Burgers with Mozzarella cheese to the text yet I put it (albeit misspelled) in the choices, so yes I am aware of that mistake. Never write while tired and hungry