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Re: The "Official" TG Caption Thread
This one was intentionally made to be a shorter story, turned out as long as the usual ones. I feel this one is a bit more touching, however, which is what some stories do lack. I get a bit tired, and sometimes just bored out of my mind, when folks use the 'complete mind wipe' technique to solve everything. Here I leave a sort of 'its what you decide' ending while making the story itself a bit... well cute in my opinion. Possibly to match the image, in a way.
Comments, compliments, suggestions are welcome, of course. In fact greatly appreciated. Last edited by Icanseestuffandstuff; 11-27-2018 at 09:19 PM. |
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Is there anyway we could see less walls of text? More line breaks?
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02-17-2010 | #136 |
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In general, I prefer captions to put the focus on the image, not the story. I feel they should be a couple short, imaginative lines describing the events of the picture and immediately before it, but not an entire story. Most of the captions in this thread seem to be the reverse: An entire long wall of text with an attached image.
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Indeed, Icanseestuff... you do good work you just need to work on your formatting, getting a good pic to text ratio, even if that means ditching the smaller sized images.
Here's a few examples, some of my favorites I received when I used to hang out at Rachel's Haven.
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Alright, tried another one. This one has a bigger picture to help compensate for the usual wall of text. Not saying that fixes things, but hopefully you can enjoy the story a bit more that way. Also there are splits, so it's a much easier wall of text to soak in.
EDIT: Continuing to work for the better of progress, comments are still appreciated. Although I probably just gave Darklyte a heart attack with this enormous text attack. Last edited by Icanseestuffandstuff; 11-27-2018 at 09:19 PM. |
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Came to me out of nowhere. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I tried to take up a new approach here.
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02-18-2010 | #141 |
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I still find the no NC-17 rule bizarre.
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Woo-hoo, finally got my third set of three finished! In honor of that, these are all made to involve changing because of science! (I noticed that all my previous stuff had been magical causes.)
First, a beach hunk learns why being the center of attention is not always good...as well as the consequences of tanning too long! Second, a look into a new idea for civil service! Warning to those who don't enjoy it; this one's a bimbo cap. Finally, a SW cap that seems to have resulted in my usual wall of text shrinking too! Dedicating this one to a person on this forum who's a lot of fun and was my inspiration to make this caption when I saw the picture. LOD, enjoy! And the same to all you process fans!
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The way the haven works is basically trading captions... so they did one for me and I did one for them, etc.
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Really liked bimbo cop, and the mini girl one was quite cute and amusing. Kitsune one was amusing too.
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