Just a little bit (slow MiniGTS, slow SM)

[Kerberos]

Some probably haven't noticed it yet. I know I've been following it a bit but I didn't see the update until today.

Very nice by the way. The whole premise is incredibly fun to see.

[pseudoclever]

I've personally noticed that, if you're posting some sort of content that is building up to something, the first big sex scene gets WAY less comments than everything leading up to it. Perhaps it's because the readers are...*cough* tired afterward? Anyway, the first time it happened to me it made me a little mad, so I can sympathize with you. But at this point I've come to expect it.

This is a good series and I've been enjoying it. I was a little surprised that the device caused Rachel AND her friend to grow. Was excepting the friend to shrink but...both outcomes are excellent.

[dartnet]

I like it.

[DangerousDave]

Originally Posted by pseudoclever

I was a little surprised that the device caused Rachel AND her friend to grow. Was excepting the friend to shrink but...both outcomes are excellent.

At least for now, this is a GTS/SM story. I've planned as far as Rob being a little under 5 feet tall, while Rachel's closing up on 7. He started at 6'4" and she was 5'1", so that's a role reversal with a little extra.

Beyond that, I haven't decided, so anything could happen. Especially if someone gives me a good idea

[pseudoclever]

Originally Posted by DangerousDave

At least for now, this is a GTS/SM story.

And that might be another reason you're getting less comments than you wanted, the Process crowd sort of shys away from the whole SM thing. Haven't looked at your thread over at GTS City, but I imagine it's more popular over there.

As far as ideas:

- SW aspect obviously. And sub-idea, hot girl-on-girl action.
- She uses it in a crowd. (Hard to render I'm sure, maybe you could just suggest it.) With the effect that, like ~1 inch on everyone around her, +X feet for her.
- The device not only steals height, but also "attributes" from other girls. As in, muscle, breasts, etc.

[DangerousDave]

Originally Posted by pseudoclever

And that might be another reason you're getting less comments than you wanted, the Process crowd sort of shys away from the whole SM thing.

I don't know about that. Sure, there are some vocal naysayers against SM, but I think most people like it as one of the many aspects of GTS. Granted, SM by itself doesn't really belong on this site, and I wouldn't really want it to, but attached to a female size change (shrunken couples, size transfer, etc.), I think it's very accepted.
For example, the (awsome) comics by DreamTales often have a SM storyline along with the GTS/SW main stories. And his work is some of the most prominent content featured alongside Lorekeep's.

Originally Posted by pseudoclever

- She uses it in a crowd. (Hard to render I'm sure, maybe you could just suggest it.) With the effect that, like ~1 inch on everyone around her, +X feet for her.

Definitely hard to render, but I may try it. Maybe 1-2 men on screen, and the rest off.

Originally Posted by pseudoclever

- The device not only steals height, but also "attributes" from other girls. As in, muscle, breasts, etc.

I like the breast transfer concept. It's like beauty theft, but without an ugly woman left standing at the end (which I wouldn't want to see), just a flat one.
I'll look for a way to incorporate that.

[DangerousDave]

He's dropped from 193 to 175, I figured it's time he noticed.
And he ain't happy about it...

[pseudoclever]

Nice chapter for plot development. I especially like her reaction to it - she was unaware, and at least somewhat remorseful.

[LOD]

First off I like how you made his clothes look looser like that. I know how hard it can be to make it look realistic from making my latest comic. Love the story so far and am looking forward to more

I really want to see his face when he runs into Sydney

[Max AP]

It's a pity the stone only work on men. Otherwise, Rachel will have use it to put at Sydney in her place if she dares to bully at her man.

Also, I don't know, but Dr. Pym will be in great trouble. I don't think that Rachel won't resist paying him a visit and make him even smaller for what he did.

Excellent chapter and art as always. The story is getting better and better.

Max

[DangerousDave]

Originally Posted by liveordie83

I really want to see his face when he runs into Sydney

That's the next scene

Originally Posted by Max AP

Dr. Pym will be in great trouble. I don't think that Rachel won't resist paying him a visit and make him even smaller for what he did.

It's definitely on the agenda.

[beguy200]

Originally Posted by DangerousDave

That's the next scene


It's definitely on the agenda.

i'am very happy to read this