Doing Attack of the 50 Ft. Cheerleader in audio form

[Comicbookbabe]

I have a recording to finish adding sound effects to and a bunch of non-fetish work today, but I was thinking about recording another file based on Aot50FC. Just highlighting the growth scenes themselves and highlighting how they should have gone.

When I say growth scenes I mean:

• Wake Up/realization scene
• Classroom/Science Lab scene
• Toga Party/Spider Attack scene

Bonus (Brittany's growth scenes):

• Strip/Injection Scene
• Sex Scene
• Final Battle Scene

I know how I would have liked them to go, but I'm curious, what would you have liked to gone differently? What do you think I specifically could do to improve on the situation for you? That's right this is your time to give me suggestions freely and I'll do my best to accommodate you with what I have.

I was intending on keeping the file short and affordable. Maybe split the idea into two different files, One for Cassie, one for Brittany.

So what do you think? Is this something that you would pick up?

[qzar9999]

Well, you know what a lot of us like to see. ...um, hear. Detailed growth description. Clothes ripping. Stuff like that. Personally I wouldn't mind if the growth is arousing.

And hell yes I'd pick this up if you did it.

[robclassact]

I'm always interested in interactions with environment: What is she outgrowing and what has she outgrown? How does she feel about that? How do things look and feel now that she's so much larger?

And of course: how does that make her feel?

[JBird]

Please tell me you aren't going to do the ear-damaging screams that Olivia Alexander does in the movie. Half her dialogue was screaming and unnecessary.

[Mr Wayne]

Originally Posted by JBird

Please tell me you aren't going to do the ear-damaging screams that Olivia Alexander does in the movie. Half her dialogue was screaming and unnecessary.

ComicBookBabe,

With that in mind.. If I heard enough of clothes stretching/rippage sound effects in the trailer(s), I think I'd prefer audio productions patterned after Sims' character Cassie simply because of the fact that she wasn't all freakish with her reactions. My single choice of a scene I would buy if the trailer convinced me well enough would be a rendition of the classroom growth scene. Here is an excerpt from the original script page of this scene:

JETT:
Cass, your skirt.

Cassie looks down. Her conservative skirt is now a tight mini. She cringes in pain once more and her skirt rips, showing off her thigh. Cassie looks at herself in disbelief.

JETT:
Are you growing?

...
The professor never finishes his sentence. As he's talking, another growth spurt hits Cassie. A button pops off of her top.

...
She grows another few inches, doubles over in pain, and covers herself. Her top and skirt are thoroughly ripped now, showing plenty of flesh.

My point? Plain and simple I would've preferred if Cassie had grown much more than even the script implies, let alone the film itself and how it cut corners. Maybe she grows to half the size she was after the scene with that jock and spider, which would be much larger than how the first spurt ended up being from the classroom. This would allow much clothes bursting, awkwardness, in the classroom itself. Small, brief bursts of increase in size, apprehension, anxiety, leading up to panic by Cassie herself. But not wearing a skirt, to clarify that I was satisfied with what Cass was wearing in the film for the classroom scene (shorts, button up shirt, underwear, shoes).

By doing brief, short spurts of growth say maybe an inch or two at a time, you could really make use of the stretching sounds her various articles of clothing should have made. This would create anxiety that not only should Cassie have been increasingly alarmed by her unexpected growth, but the increasing straining of her clothes and gradual rise in height makes things worse that her classmates would notice the predicament too. Once you begin with the stretching and straining sounds pre-clothes bursting, the pace could still be fairly steady, quick, and not so long that it goes outside of the length/cost you have in mind.

Shoes groaning ominously as her feet strain her shoes, jean shorts stretching as they squeeze with increasing discomfort on her thighs, (unseen) underwear shrinking creating arousing but awkward discomfort such as the urge to pull her panties out of her crotch through the then tighter shorts and her bra straps tightening under her button-up shirt creating the urge to pinch at them through the top itself, her boobs and torso swelling up to slowly put increasing pressure on the buttons and her bra underneath, upper arms swelling and stretching the shrinking sleeves of the shirt, increased gasping and heavier breathing from the effect of clothes shrinking and realization that whatever is happening to her it obviously isn't going to stop, expressions of slight pain as her clothes overall are so tight that the discomfort and anxiety are reaching a peak -- just as her jean shorts button bursts off with authority. Now for the clothes bursting to heighten the tension.

Louder stretching and groaning outfit sounds, followed by another intrusive pop from one of her shirt buttons, snapping of her shoe laces and bursting shoe material, an unexpected uneasy pause for a few moments to really torque Cassie's anxiety as she breaths heavily from the ordeal and whispers begging that it be over. Only to hear a deep stretching sound followed by maybe a belt buckle busting (even though she isn't wearing one in the film) over top of the already burst jean shorts button, tearing along the thighs of the shorts, the remaining shirt buttons bursting off one by one along with shirt tearing in whichever places, and now perhaps including groaning sounds of her classroom seat from her increased weight and squeezing of her ass and thighs into the sides and back of the seat.

Yeah, a fairly more sound effect intensive concept with much more apprehension than anything the film depicts. Make us go psycho from the higher tension in this sort of approach. Make our.... eye.. balls... pop out. ;-)

If you've ever seen the ending of The Incredible Shrinking Woman, note the sound of Tomlin's shoes groaning before she looks down at them. Perhaps this sort of moment would be best for what to reveal in the trailer. The moment before all hell bursts forth.


...so yeah. Kinda skip the implied science lab scene. If by my idea, Cassie would already be big enough, freaked out, and noticed by everyone too. She'd even bump her head on the classroom doorway as she made her hasty exit onto the busy campus. ^_^


Btw, early happy BirThDaY. B-)

[Comicbookbabe]

Going to record this this weekend.

Originally Posted by qzar9999

Well, you know what a lot of us like to see. ...um, hear. Detailed growth description. Clothes ripping. Stuff like that. Personally I wouldn't mind if the growth is arousing.

And hell yes I'd pick this up if you did it.

I do plan on a lot of clothes ripping and pleasure along with the growth, cause those are my favorite aspects too.

Originally Posted by robclassact

I'm always interested in interactions with environment: What is she outgrowing and what has she outgrown? How does she feel about that? How do things look and feel now that she's so much larger?

And of course: how does that make her feel?

A lot of feelings, got it

Originally Posted by JBird

Please tell me you aren't going to do the ear-damaging screams that Olivia Alexander does in the movie. Half her dialogue was screaming and unnecessary.

My new microphone won't even let me peak anymore, so pretty sure it's not even possible for me to pierce your ears.

Mr. Wayne,

Not gonna quote that book of yours. Seriously good writing, but not exactly what I was looking for.

I'll try and get some of that in there, but I wasn't looking for anything detailed or specific like that, plus I loved the scene in the lab when she stands up and towers over the camera, er uh, science partner, or when she was giving Jett a private show as she continued to grow taller.

[drwhoopass]

Originally Posted by JBird

Please tell me you aren't going to do the ear-damaging screams that Olivia Alexander does in the movie. Half her dialogue was screaming and unnecessary.

Disagree 1000000000%, Olivia was the highlight of the movie and the only one with any decent acting

[Mr Wayne]

Originally Posted by Comicbookbabe

Mr. Wayne,

Not gonna quote that book of yours. Seriously good writing, but not exactly what I was looking for.

I'll try and get some of that in there, but I wasn't looking for anything detailed or specific like that, plus I loved the scene in the lab when she stands up and towers over the camera, er uh, science partner, or when she was giving Jett a private show as she continued to grow taller.

ComicBookBabe,

*bows*

That wasn't a book.. Just me going overboard. Lol. Should give you some ideas for whatever you record, plus future concepts from a fan of your work. I figured I'd just go all out and woo you with my attention to details. ^_^

The idea of re-doing the growth scene to embellish what was portrayed in the lab with just Cassie growing and Jett gawking, sounds like a winner. I like how you referred to that scene, "when she was giving Jett a private show as she continued to grow taller". Sounds like someone prefers an audience. *~Pick Me, pick mE, Pick ME~*

If you can pull off the stretching clothing and more authoritative popping sounds, showing off for your fan Jett, grow whenever you're ready. Just be sure to shrink back down to your normal size after the recording is finalized, so you can keep teasing us with your talent(s). :P

[JBird]

Originally Posted by drwhoopass

Disagree 1000000000%, Olivia was the highlight of the movie and the only one with any decent acting

If being a cartoon bitch and screaming like a petulant child is decent acting, then I suppose she deserves an Oscar.

I will concede that the Jena Sims (Cassie) is a wooden block compared to Olivia, but that still doesn't make up for either performances. Then again, it's a Roger Corman production. 'Nuff said.

[Comicbookbabe]

Here we go.

I've added heartbeats and stomach gurgles and stretching sounds to the files to make the growth more believable, made it so the growth gave each character a bit more pleasure, and tried to focus on much more than just their tits when they grew. (That was my beef, Jenna has some seriously gorgeous legs and they didn't even focus on them stretching out of anything!)

Cass' Scenes

Britt's Scenes

Discounted Duo Pack

And of course free samples for both files. I hope you enjoy!

[Mr Wayne]

ComicBookBabe,

Despite my tight finance situation, you did discount well enough and the heart beating in Cass' sample convinced me to take the plunge. That, and to support your honest effort. More to come.

~*~*UPdate*~*~

The best improvement and a personal favorite part of growth process for me was the use of the heart beating sound effect. The particular file you used not only had no audio feedback as I have seen in other video productions, it wasn't too loud and overpowering, too soft to hear, and had a nice commanding build up of increased speed. I know some people could get tired of hearing me swoon over the use of heart beating in growth productions. What can I say? It just rings my bell.

Your heart beating build up was so good that each time it was used, I kept begging for it to continue longer and not stop. So, I would definitely chalk a big check mark for using this file down the road. Perhaps lasting longer as the heart beating reaches it's fastest pace, doing productions with growth spurts close together and each successive one resuming the fast paced heart beating.

I liked how you paced yourself and followed much of the source material, and I would have been satisfied if you changed to a single larger growth spurt given how well your heart beating turned out. Win, win. Of course, my favorite was the second growth spurt with the apprehension reactions. Assuming that the lower cost meant not as detailed clothes destruction sound effects, for the discounted price you still did well enough to hit the bell with your.. hammer. ^_^

You didn't over-use the gurgling and it was well placed to signal each impending growth spurt. I noticed a difference in the stretching sounds used, as a second one for the shoes that was nice to hear the distinction. Different material sounds different when strained. How each type would sound is beyond my sound expertise. But having you use different stretching sounds was a plus, and something I encourage you to explore for future productions. Stretching shoes, jeans or pants material, belts, fabric if so, etc. The tearing sound, though, did come across a lot like paper. Perhaps that was a cost effective choice.

Using the exact same heart beating, including the use of an extended version if possible, and a more thorough pallette of clothing destruction portrayal (individual buttons popping with authority, better fabric tearing such as for shoes, pants, shirts, maybe a watch band snapping and belts too), I can really see you doing growth production of several spurts close together to really fill up a room. Add mostly apprehensive reactions, and you'll be close to bringing the house down for fans like me.

Funny how just the solid heart beating sold it mostly for me. Guess I have an audio fetish I never really acknowledged. Now that you have my weakness, CBB, make me beg. LoL.

[debr1s]

Just saw this thread... most intriguing.
Mr. Wayne, this is your Feline friend from GC-apparently we share the same interests. I owe you a reply to your recent missive. Sorry for the delay-RL very very busy.

I know how to create the illusion of different materials under strain. I'm a sfx sound designer. Comicbookbabe, you have me intrigued-perhaps we should discuss amongst ourselves. I'll PM later. I must run off to work now.

Cheers,
-debr1s