Shrinking Script

Nom Anor · 02-11-2010

The other night, Jamball's posted an excellent Growth Script and it inspired me to go digging through my hard drive to locate a relic of last summer. " Drink 'n Shrink", as I called it, was a script for a video project that never made it past the initial stages. But I liked the idea and held onto it, completely forgetting about it until Jamball posted his GTS script. I've made a few tweaks and I'd love to know what people think.

(Gary, feel free to borrow it if you need a concept for another Shrinking video.

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Roarz · 02-11-2010

I loved it...I ALWAYS love a good script with video/drawings. Without it, everything seems flat. And yours was excellent

qzar9999 · 02-12-2010

That's certainly interesting. I wouldn't mind seeing a video of that...

strawman1985 · 02-12-2010

very good

Shrinkmaster22 · 02-12-2010

Liked it, although it seems both shrinking sequences are "incomplete" it would be nice to have had at least one of the girls shrink completley.

Nom Anor · 02-12-2010

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Originally Posted by Shrinkmaster22

Liked it, although it seems both shrinking sequences are "incomplete" it would be nice to have had at least one of the girls shrink completely.

I was dealing with the limitations of technology and practicalities when I wrote it. I know now it is doable thanks to what Gary's done and can always revise it further. I do like where both their respective shrinks end though -- the process itself (and the baggy clothes) interests me more than the final product.

Captain Ash · 02-12-2010

Shrinking potion + coffee is always good.
Loving it.

Captain Ash

LOD · 02-13-2010

I would definitely love to see any further adventures of these two ^^

Nom Anor · 02-19-2010

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Originally Posted by liveordie83

I would definitely love to see any further adventures of these two ^^

You might. I may try to develop this as a comic at some point down the road.

talon6419 · 05-15-2010

LUV the way this script ran through my head!

As far as feedback, the scene where her pants and undies finally loose purchase, and is replaced by her shirt tail. If you're adverse to nudity okay, BUT if not, but you still don't want frontal nudity, how about just a brief little tush shot before the shirt tail drops, as a not amused Renee smirks.

tal

Nom Anor · 05-15-2010

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Originally Posted by talon6419

LUV the way this script ran through my head!

As far as feedback, the scene where her pants and undies finally loose purchase, and is replaced by her shirt tail. If you're adverse to nudity okay, BUT if not, but you still don't want frontal nudity, how about just a brief little tush shot before the shirt tail drops, as a not amused Renee smirks.

tal

Glad you liked it.

I'm still interested in developing this as a comic, so we'll see how things progress.

gladewalker · 05-15-2010

Well done!

I've thought about even doing audio scripts too. The cute little voices would be adorable and sometimes it's worth leaving things up to the imagination ;-)

02-11-2010	#2
Roarz Lurker Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 18	Re: Shrinking Script I loved it...I ALWAYS love a good script with video/drawings. Without it, everything seems flat. And yours was excellent

02-12-2010	#3
qzar9999 Purveyor of Porn Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gallifrey Posts: 7,064	Re: Shrinking Script That's certainly interesting. I wouldn't mind seeing a video of that... __________________ Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything.

02-12-2010	#4
strawman1985 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Nevada Posts: 117	Re: Shrinking Script very good

02-12-2010	#5
Shrinkmaster22 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 457	Re: Shrinking Script Liked it, although it seems both shrinking sequences are "incomplete" it would be nice to have had at least one of the girls shrink completley. __________________ After years of research and countless hours of labor, a lone scientist finally discovered the secret to a new generation Shrink Ray that had the ability to shrink clothes... ...Thank goodness I was able to silence him before he told anyone.

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Captain Ash Adventurer Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 778	Re: Shrinking Script Shrinking potion + coffee is always good. Loving it. Captain Ash __________________ ~ The Shrink-Crystal ~_~The Enchanted Sorceress~ >> DeviantArt

02-13-2010	#8
LOD Tieing a Knot Or two Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Breaking Down The Walls Of Your Imagination. Posts: 19,660	Re: Shrinking Script I would definitely love to see any further adventures of these two ^^ __________________ Claire's Project

05-15-2010	#10
talon6419 New Participant :) Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 88	Re: Shrinking Script LUV the way this script ran through my head! As far as feedback, the scene where her pants and undies finally loose purchase, and is replaced by her shirt tail. If you're adverse to nudity okay, BUT if not, but you still don't want frontal nudity, how about just a brief little tush shot before the shirt tail drops, as a not amused Renee smirks. tal

05-15-2010	#12
gladewalker Mad Scientist Join Date: May 2005 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 371	Re: Shrinking Script Well done! I've thought about even doing audio scripts too. The cute little voices would be adorable and sometimes it's worth leaving things up to the imagination ;-)