Started writing a BE Series, would love some opinions.

CaptainXero · 03-28-2014

Hi there everybody,

For years I have been pretty much lurking under the handle "Spzero" only occasionally popping up to mention something, followed by cowardly sneaking back off to not talk again. But, I don't really feel like lurking all that much anymore. I've wanted to find a way to help give back to this community, as well as other inflation fans out there, and because of that, I have written my first "Short" story: Introducing PlaXero http://captainxero.deviantart.com/ar...Xero-443292344

Weirdly enough, this first story is actually rather serious, with only implied breast expansion. However, I felt as if I needed to get the back story out in the open before I could get to the "Good stuff" so to speak. Within the next few weeks I should have not only a full BE story, but a Butt inflation story with commissioned artwork to go along with it.

I would love any criticism you all could provide. Like I said, I am new to this, and while this is a lot more tame than future stories, I wanted to lay the groundwork so that future stories in this universe make sense. But i'd like to finally be able to do something for everybody here. That being said, I hope you all enjoy the story, and hope to not be anywhere near as lurk-ish in the near future

03-28-2014	#1
CaptainXero Enjoys the Finer Things Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 8	Started writing a BE Series, would love some opinions. Hi there everybody, For years I have been pretty much lurking under the handle "Spzero" only occasionally popping up to mention something, followed by cowardly sneaking back off to not talk again. But, I don't really feel like lurking all that much anymore. I've wanted to find a way to help give back to this community, as well as other inflation fans out there, and because of that, I have written my first "Short" story: Introducing PlaXero http://captainxero.deviantart.com/ar...Xero-443292344 Weirdly enough, this first story is actually rather serious, with only implied breast expansion. However, I felt as if I needed to get the back story out in the open before I could get to the "Good stuff" so to speak. Within the next few weeks I should have not only a full BE story, but a Butt inflation story with commissioned artwork to go along with it. I would love any criticism you all could provide. Like I said, I am new to this, and while this is a lot more tame than future stories, I wanted to lay the groundwork so that future stories in this universe make sense. But i'd like to finally be able to do something for everybody here. That being said, I hope you all enjoy the story, and hope to not be anywhere near as lurk-ish in the near future