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Very_Good_Karma · 12-18-2007

Woohoo! Dream recursion for the win!

This is my first time seeing this comic. You've done an excellent job. The shading and the panel composition were especially good. Your perspective was a teeny bit awkward in some places, but frankly I'm just impressed you attempted it- the creative angles really brought the comic to life.

Oh, and I like that the girl enjoys her boobs! Can't stress that enough. Happy girl, happy boobs, happy ending, happy readers. It's all happy!

The only real weak point is the faint lettering, and I think that's partly an issue with the scan and my fuzzy monitor; but consider posting a nice resize better fit to a monitor along with the high-res, because browsers generally do a crappy job of zooming. The letters themselves are well-formed enough, but it might help to set them off with some sort of proper word ballons. Possibly just consider darkening the text a shade in photoshop.

This is a very nice comic and I really enjoyed getting to see it. Thank you so much for creating it and sharing it with the rest of us.

12-18-2007	#44
Very_Good_Karma Likes Happy Endings Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 188	Woohoo! Dream recursion for the win! This is my first time seeing this comic. You've done an excellent job. The shading and the panel composition were especially good. Your perspective was a teeny bit awkward in some places, but frankly I'm just impressed you attempted it- the creative angles really brought the comic to life. Oh, and I like that the girl enjoys her boobs! Can't stress that enough. Happy girl, happy boobs, happy ending, happy readers. It's all happy! The only real weak point is the faint lettering, and I think that's partly an issue with the scan and my fuzzy monitor; but consider posting a nice resize better fit to a monitor along with the high-res, because browsers generally do a crappy job of zooming. The letters themselves are well-formed enough, but it might help to set them off with some sort of proper word ballons. Possibly just consider darkening the text a shade in photoshop. This is a very nice comic and I really enjoyed getting to see it. Thank you so much for creating it and sharing it with the rest of us. __________________ Musical Process: The Process Forum Soundtrack Last edited by Very_Good_Karma; 12-18-2007 at 09:29 AM.