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Logan73 · 01-15-2009

I always enjoy your work, wussy, and this is no exception. Having said that, I'm not really a fan of describing growth with a rapid succession of numbers. Sure a measurement now and then is great for reference, but too many and it starts to feel a little clinical and inorganic. However, the actual descriptions you wrote were very nice, particularly the parts referencing clothing.
I hope you'll keep writing and posting here!

01-15-2009	#2
Logan73 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 138	Re: Story: Gamer Girl I always enjoy your work, wussy, and this is no exception. Having said that, I'm not really a fan of describing growth with a rapid succession of numbers. Sure a measurement now and then is great for reference, but too many and it starts to feel a little clinical and inorganic. However, the actual descriptions you wrote were very nice, particularly the parts referencing clothing. I hope you'll keep writing and posting here!