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Unread 01-15-2009   #1
Wussy
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Cool Story: Gamer Girl

I don't really like that title, but I have to call it something, right?

Anyway, I welcome any and all feedback, positive or negative. Feel free to trash me on my spelling, grammar, odd word choice, or whatever.

I'm still doing story requests on Blar's board, but this one was an original idea so I'm cross-posting it here.

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?Hey, sweetie. Whatcha doin???

The gentle voice and soft hands on his shoulders told Aaron exactly who was standing behind him. He paused the game and turned to face his fianc?.

?Oh, hey, Mei. I?m just trying out your grandmother?s Christmas present.?

?You finally got it to work, huh??

?Yeah, finally. I took me a week to figure out how to mod the system to play Chinese imports. Next time you see her, tell her that I really appreciate it, but I?d prefer if she gets me a game that?s in English.?

She kissed him gently on the forehead. ?Well, don?t keep me in suspense, what is it??

He turned his attention back to the TV and unpaused the game. It looked like a very complicated robot-building game, made all the more imposing by the fact that all of the menus were in Chinese.

?It?s really neat! Giant monsters are attacking Hong Kong, and you have to build a robot to stop them. It?s actually been pretty easy so far, but I?m stuck on the second-to-last boss. Some crappy Godzilla knock-off.?

He hit START on the controller and his newly created mech flew out from the hangar and into the middle of the city. Mei-Xing smiled when she was that his enemy was indeed a giant bipedal lizard. Several pieces of metal acted both as armor for the creature and protection from copyright infringement.

?That?s it? That?s your arch-enemy? It?s a joke!?

?No way! This thing is tough. It blocks everything I throw at it! Watch!?

Aaron piloted his 50? robot into combat against his 60? enemy. Every time he or the lizard slammed into a building and destroyed it, he cringed slightly as he watched his score drop. Mei watched as Aaron?s mech jumped high into the air and launched what looked like hundreds of tiny missiles as well as a virtual hailstorm of bullets, but the creature simply blocked most of the fire with its metal plates. The monster?s life bar barely moved a fraction of an inch.

?That?s it? That was kind of? pathetic.?

?I know! That?s my problem. Nothing works against this guy!?

The computer opponent decided that it had enough and retaliated with its own fire breath. Unlike Aaron?s attack, the damage was devastating and his life bar dropped to critical with just one hit. Its victory assured, the giant lizard stomped up to Aaron?s robot and simply whacked it with its tail a couple of times until it exploded in an impressive fireball.

The screen faded to black, and displayed what she could only guess were the options ?Continue? or ?Quit?. Aaron tossed the controller onto the ground, clearly frustrated. ?Every time! I just can?t hit him with anything!?

Mei rubbed her boyfriend?s shoulders in an effort to console him. ?Why not try something else??

?I?ve launched missiles, machine guns, giant ?fuck-off? cannons, lasers, everything! Nothing hurts him!?

?Did you look up how to beat him on the internet??

?No! That?s cheating! I?m trying to win this legit. Besides, the game?s too new; I couldn?t find anything.?

?Well? why not hit him with a cold attack? Lizards are cold-blooded, so that?ll slow him down, right??

?I don?t have anything like?. Wait?. No, I do have a cryo-cannon! I never use it because it does no damage, but?.?

He quickly went back into the mech customization screen and began rebuilding his creation. Weapons and armor were all swapped around as he created a totally new design. Seconds later, his newest model was back on the front lines and ready for another round.

This time, instead of stay away and pelting it at range, he closed the distance as quickly as he could and fired his cold beam at the monster. It?s life bar immediately began to flicker and the monster changed colors until it was a pale blue. Its movements slowed until eventually it was frozen in place.

?Honey, you?re a genius!? he shouted as he began to beat on the helpless enemy. In moments, its life bar was drained and it fell over dead.

Immediately the load screen popped up for the final level. But Aaron was stunned to see that the portrait of the enemy looked exactly like Mei-Xing! He turned around to see what her reaction was, but she was nowhere to be found.

?Honey? Mei? Where are you?!?

He heard her voice cry out from somewhere behind him, ?I?m? I don?t know where I am!?

?What? I hear you, but I can?t see you! Are you hiding in the closet or something??

?Closet? No! I?m? I think I?m in a city? but everything?s so small! Where are you??

Aaron suddenly realized that her voice was coming from the TV, where his robot was sitting patiently, waiting to be launched into battle. ?Honey, don?t move! I?m going to try something.?

?I?m scared?.? Her voice was full of a worry that he had never heard from her before.

He wondered if he was losing his mind, but he pressed START and launched his robot into battle once again. When it reached its destination and settled down for combat, there was no mistaking what he was seeing.

His game system was one of the very latest, and was capable of putting out graphics in stunning high-def 1080p. Still, there was no doubt that despite the impressive graphics, his opponent was not computer generated, but instead was his very real, flesh-and-blood fianc?. She had somehow been pulled right into the game, and at 50? tall was the exact same size as his robot and was ready to face him as the final boss!

She looked at the robot nervously. She was still wearing her red and green Christmas-themed sweater that he had given her two weeks ago and her hip-hugging jeans that she loved so much. Her short black hair framed her beautiful Asian face perfectly. Her normally almond-shaped brown eyes were wide with confusion and fear.

?Is? is that a robot? It looks familiar somehow?. But where are you, Aaron? It sounds like you?re shouting from the sky or something!?

?Honey? Mei, this is going to sound weird, but I think you?re in the game.?

?No, that doesn?t sound weird at all. It sounds impossible!?

He moved his robot closer to her, and she took a few steps back, flattening several houses and causing him to lose a few hundred points.

?I know it?s impossible, but it?s happening! You?re facing the same robot that you saw me use not 5 minutes ago! And I know the city looks neat and all, but the programmers were also lazy and took a bunch of shortcuts. Check out the people! They?re absolutely clueless as to what?s going on.?

Mei looked down at her feet and saw that, sure enough, there were tiny people no bigger than her thumb walking around who didn?t seem even the slightest bit fazed at the sight that was right in front of them. She reached down to pick one up, and as she brought it closer she could see that it had almost no detail at all, but was instead vaguely human-shaped. It even kept trying to continue on its walk animation. She flicked it into the sky, not seeing that Aaron?s score dropped another 10 points.

?Honey, please stop doing that. You?re messing up my high score!?

?Your? your high score?! I?m stuck inside a video game and you?re worried about your score? How the hell am I supposed to get out of here?!!?

She began going on a destructive rampage in the outskirts of the city, flattening numerous houses no larger than her foot. The destruction she was wreaking was clearly not as impressive as she thought it would be, as the houses just flickered out of existence, so she began stomping towards the more heavily populated (and costly) downtown area.

Aaron sent his character after her, but still kept his distance. When she got angry like this, he found no better way to calm her down than to let her work it out. Still, he couldn?t help but think about how badly this was going to hurt his score.

She punched a skyscraper as large as she was, and the top half broke off while the bottom part crumbled into digitally-rendered dust. She flung the broken piece into another building, where it too fell apart in the exact same fashion. Furious that the cheaply-programmed city wasn?t satisfying her destructive urges, she stormed off until she found the tallest building in the city.

Even though Mei-Xing was 50? tall, it still dwarfed her. A massive skyscraper standing over 100 stories tall, the tip of the building was almost 1600? into the sky. She slammed her fist into it, but it didn?t even make a dent. She kicked it as hard as she could, but the game still refused to register any impact.

?Honey, please calm down. We?ll figure this out, I promise.?

She turned her attention to the robot, anger still raging in her eyes. ?Figure this out? Figure this out?!? She gave it a tremendous shove, sending it flying back dozens of feet until it slammed into a building and lost nearly a quarter of its life. ?I?m stuck inside a goddamn video game, while you sit there on the couch watching TV and holding a stupid controller!? She kicked the mech, and another quarters of its life bar disappeared. ?And you want me to calm down?!? She punched it in the head, and its life bar was critical.

The mech staggered and sparks flew from its damaged body. ?I?m not calming down!? she shouted, and with one last stomp the robot was reduced to scrap and the screen faded to black.

Aaron was stunned at what had just happened, and even more so when he couldn?t hear Mei-Xing?s voice anymore. ?Mei? Mei?! Answer me!?

?Aaron? It?s dark... What happened? Why is it so dark??

Aaron reasoned that the game was no longer rendering the city, so she was looking at the same black screen he was. He quickly mashed the controller?s buttons and restarted the level. In seconds, everything was back to the way it was. The city had been reset and Mei was back in her starting position, as was his robot.

?What the hell was that??

?You killed me, so it went to the game over screen.?

?That was terrifying. I?ve never seen anything so black?.?

He couldn?t even imagine what she had just gone through. For her, the universe had literally just turned off.

?Well, we need to figure something out. If you kill me, the level just resets. So that means that the only other option is??

?What?! No, you?re not killing me! You?re insane!?

?Wait, let me finish! We don?t even know if you can even be hurt. Let me try some of my weakest guns, just to see what happens.?

The 50? woman thought about it for a second, then nodded her approval. Aaron switched to his light machine guns, the weakest weapons he had, and tapped the fire button as quickly as he could. A small burst of yellow bullets flew from the gun barrel and slammed into her sweater-covered chest. She yelped in pain and fell backwards, flattening another group of homes in the process.

?That really hurt!? she shouted, rubbing the sore spot on her chest.

Aaron looked up at her life bar. It had barely moved. This was not going to be easy.

?Babe, here?s the thing: I?m scared to turn off the game, but I don?t know any other way out of it. If you beat me I can continue, but if I beat you, I win the game. Surely it?ll let you go once the game is over?.?

?Those felt like red-hot needles! You?re not hitting me with that again!?

?Well, what do we do then??

Mei closed her eyes and lay there deep in thought. While the thought, she did what she always did while thinking, which was tapping her feet. Aaron wisely didn?t say anything, but silently watched as his score fell little by little as her massive feet destroyed the pedestrians stupid enough to walk under them.

Finally, after a minute, she opened her eyes again. Getting back onto her feet, she said, ?OK, we?ll try it your way. But, you?re not using those guns again. What else do you have??

Aaron quickly cycled through his inventory. ?Laser sword?? She shook her head.

?Tank cannon??

?Nope.?

?Missiles??

?No!?

?Umm? flamethrower??

?Don?t even think about it!?

?Well? let?s see here? how about a Pulsed Energy Emitter??

?Pulsed Energy? PEE? You want to PEE on me?? She fell to the ground in peals of laughter.

?Well, not really, but that?s what the game calls it??

?Oh no! (Ha ha!) Look out! He?s going to PEE on you! Run!? she shouted in between giggle fits.

After a few moments of her rolling on the ground, demolishing more houses and lowering his score further, he spoke up again. ?Well, do you want to try that one or not??

Mei stood back up again and dusted herself off. She tried to keep a straight face, but every so often a smirk would burst through. ?Yeah, sure, why not. Unleash your PEE!? she managed to blurt out before falling back into laughter.

Aaron shrugged and tapped the fire button. A small green energy beam fired from his robot?s weapon and enveloped her in a bright green glow for a second.

He waited for several seconds, but she seemed frozen in place. ?Honey? How was that??

In response, she grabbed the robot and shook it violently, causing it to lose about a fifth of its life bar and Aaron to nearly drop the controller from the unexpected rumble. ?Do it again! Don?t stop! Ever!?

Aaron just stared at the screen while his hysterical fianc? continued to shake the robot. ?Shoot me! Shoot me harder! Do it now!?

He obediently held down the fire button and watched as Mei became enveloped in the green glow again. This time, however, she seemed prepared for whatever it did. She began to moan softly.

?Keep? it going?. Don?t stop?.?

As he held down the fire button and she continued to glow, he began to notice something else happening. Her head was beginning to slowly rise higher into the air. He looked down, but her feet were still firmly planted into the digital ground. She was beginning to grow.

He recognized her moans as the sounds she made when they were in bed together, but louder and more intense. As she passed 60? he could start to see her smooth, flat stomach as her sweater began to rise up.

At 65? the sleeves of her sweater were pulling far enough away to expose her slender wrists and forearm.

At 70? the seams on her jeans were starting to pull too tight, and hints of her pale skin were beginning to peak through.

At 75? her jeans had split almost the entire length of her thigh.

At 80? her sweater exposed her full midriff, with the sleeves not quite reaching her elbows. He heard a ?ping!? sound and something hit his robot for a bit of damage. It was the button from the front of her jeans finally giving up.

At 85? her feet finally burst from her shoes like an egg exploding in the microwave. She fell to her knees and ran one hand up under her sweater and the other went between her legs. Her moaning intensified.

At 90? the sleeves of her sweater could stretch no more. The over-stressed yarn, long showing glimpses of skin underneath, opened up into full-blown tears. It was also around this time that Aaron noticed that not only was her sweater getting tighter from her size, but because her B-cup breasts weren?t looking like Bs anymore.

At 100? she had her first orgasm. She arched her back and shrieked as her sweater finally gave up the ghost. Simultaneously, what was left of her jeans almost practically exploded from her legs. Aaron could see that she wasn?t wearing her usual underwear, but instead the game had seen fit to give her a small, silvery bikini that shimmered with reflected light.

At 110? her former Bs were now Ds at least. Aaron had to pull the robot back so it wouldn?t get accidently crushed by her large-and-still-growing legs.

At 150? she had her second orgasm. Now three times her ?original? height, she towered over his robot character even sitting down. Her D breasts were now DDs at least, and easily overflowed the hand she was using to grope them.

As she passed 200? Aaron abruptly cut off the beam. The glow faded and Mei looked around, confused. She eventually found the small 50? robot and, grabbing it firmly with both hands, rose up to her full height. She glared at it fiercely and said, ?Why. Did. You. Stop.?

Aaron knew she?d be upset, but he didn?t think she?d be that furious. He had only seen her that upset one other time, and he didn?t want to go through that again. He quickly blurted out, ?I-I-I thought that y-you might want to have a ch-change of scenery. S-say, downtown??

The giantess looked around her. The two story houses that dotted the landscape couldn?t even make it up to her ankles. She casually swept her foot across the ground, noting how little resistance they provided her. She set his character back down and said, ?Fine. But I meant it when I said ?don?t stop!?? She took one last look at the robot that wasn?t quite as tall as her knees before jogging into the heart of downtown.

She had been waiting there for a while by the time that Aaron?s robot caught up to her. She was leaning against one of the larger skyscrapers, looking over her new outfit and endowments. ?God, look at these things!? she said, hefting one of her newly expanded breasts. ?You have no idea how good they feel!? She abruptly stopped fondling herself and her face became serious. ?Well, shorty? You know what to do.?

Aaron backed up his robot, took aim, and pressed the fire button again. The glow once again enveloped her, and her knees went weak. She dropped onto all fours, the shockwave destroying several parked cars and dozens of artificial citizens. This time, she was growing remarkably fast, and he had to travel at nearly full speed in reverse just to avoid being crushed.

250?? 300?? 400??. She passed all of these in less than a minute and continued to climb higher into the air. At 500?, even on her knees she was larger than half of the buildings that surrounded her. Her massive body took up the full width of the 8-lane highway and still was pressing against the buildings that flanked it.

As she continued to grow her hips began to press painfully against the skyscrapers that surrounded her. Unlike a normal building of concrete and steel, she couldn?t simply knock a hole into the side. The shoddy programming of the city ensured that they buildings wouldn?t give until they took sufficient damage, so she reluctantly moved her hands from between her legs and began pressing against them with all of her considerable might.

600?? 650?.? And still the buildings refused to move. Her breasts passed E and were moving into F range. Her cantaloupe-sized breasts bounced and jiggled with every movement, the bikini clearly there for modesty and not support.

The heat was building up, and she could no longer stand it. When she was around 700? she climaxed again, which gave her the power necessary to finally destroy the two skyscrapers that had her pinned for so long. Just like the smaller buildings, they broke cleanly in two, with the lower half dissolving into dust.

She started to stand up, but the sensations were too much and she fell back to her knees. Aaron considered turning off the beam, but almost as if she read his mind she glared at the robot for a second and he understand exactly what she was thinking.

700?? 800?.? She was growing even faster now. Aaron?s robot was hitting the edge of the map, and with nowhere else to go, he flew it into one of the corners and waited. After all, she was so large now that even on her knees she practically filled the sky. He had a clear shot with the beam from anywhere in the city.

900?? 1000??. She was destroying the entire city without even moving. Aaron watched in dismay as his score fell constantly, with minor bumps as 50 story skyscrapers disintegrated. Her breasts passed G and were moving into H territory. Easily the largest he had ever seen, she continued to give them constant attention with one hand while she furiously worked the other between her legs. He wished that he could touch them too, but had to make do with watching her practiced hands knead and massage them.

1100?? 1200??. There was only one building now that was larger than her, and at the rate she was growing that wouldn?t be true for much longer. Inbetween gasps he could see her eyeing it, and he wondered what she would do after she had surpassed that final challenge. She shuddered in orgasm again, and earthquake from her motions flattened nearly a third of the city in that instant. There was hardly anything left standing, and still she grew.

1300??1400??. With every move she made scores of NPCs and dozens of buildings were destroyed. She was utterly unstoppable. She continued to loudly moan, and Aaron had to rush to turn down the volume of the TV before she blew out the speakers. Another casual movement of her leg, another thirty buildings erased from existence.

1500?? 1600??. As she orgasmed for what seemed like the hundredth time, she finally raised her hand to signal him to stop. Panting and sweating, she rose to her full height. She loomed over the entire artificial city, with only the single massive building in the center of downtown as the only remaining landmark. She compared her new height with that of the building? and laughed. It was still larger, but only the smallest fraction. The tips of the spires were the only thing giving the building its edge.

Aaron was stunned at how gigantic she had become. Even pulling the camera as far out as it could go it, it was simply not possible to see all of her at once. Over a quarter of a mile tall now, there was hardly anything left standing that was bigger than her smallest toe. Each of her feet were several city blocks in length, and he couldn?t even imagine how many thousands of tons of pressure she exerted with every step.

She turned her attention back to the sole object in the game?s existence that was still bigger than her. The building almost seemed to taunt her with its very existence. With a mighty roar, she lashed out at it with a kick so powerful it could shatter mountains. To her satisfaction the building snapped in half much like the other ones, with the top half falling to the ground while the lower half crumbled into nothingness.

Mei surveyed what was left of the landscape. The roads were intact; obviously the programmers never bothered to include damage for them. Almost everything else, however, had been swept clean. She grinned when she found a small cluster of buildings still standing. With a single footstep, dozens of high-rise buildings and hundreds of digital people were wiped out.

?Aaron, come here! I want to see how big I am compared to your robot!?

He dutifully put it into flight mode, but found that the game had a ceiling of 500 feet. He wasn?t even able to fly up to her knees.

?Sorry, honey. The game won?t let me get up that high. You?ll have to come down to me.?

That was when Aaron saw the single most impressive thing in his life: she laid down.

He watched from his character?s perspective as what seemed like an infinite expanse of leg filled the screen. Once she was on her knees, she dropped onto all fours, and the sensation of her newly enlarged breasts rubbing against the ground caused her to moan softly. He gulped when he realized that his character wasn?t as big as a single fingernail. Still she went down, adjusting her legs until she was at last lying down on her side.

If anything, she was even more imposing. If he didn?t pull the camera back, his screen would be filled with a single eye. She held out her hand in front of her face, waiting for him to land on it. As the robot flew over and landed gently on her palm, he still couldn?t believe how large she was.

?Well? I?m waiting.?

?It?s on there! Look at the tip of your index finger.?

She leaned in even closer and stared for a few moments, after which she burst out laughing. ?That?s it? It?s nothing but a tiny smudge! It?s not even the size of an ant! More like an ant?s leg!?

A dark shadow fell over his character. ?Hey,? she said, ?look up.?

Aaron rotated the camera, and hovering above his tiny robot was her other hand. A second later the screen went black.

?Hey! Aaron? What happened? It?s gone black again!?

?I?m sitting at the game over screen because you killed me. What did you think would happen??

?I?m sorry, I just got so caught up in the moment. Hurry up and restart the level so I can play some more!?

Aaron sighed and selected the ?continue? option. At the mech customization screen he began to change his equipment when he heard Mei shouting, ?Oh, this is not fair! This sucks! Hurry up and get back out here already!?

He quickly finished making his choices and launched the robot out of the hangar. When it arrived at the city he could see why she was so upset. The entire city had been completely reset, with all of the buildings, cars, and people intact as if nothing had ever happened. Mei was even back to her ?normal? 50? height.

However, neither her clothes nor her body had changed, so she was still wearing the shiny silver bikini which barely covered her H-cup breasts. She was pouting, and every time she stomped her foot it sent her honeydew-sized breasts jiggling.

?What? This is not funny! I could barely see you before, and now you?re back to being eye-level! Shoot me again!?

?Are you sure? I?m not sure your chest can take much more?.?

She looked down at her breasts as if for the first time. She experimentally hefted them, feeling their weight. ?I suppose you?re right,? she said with a sigh. ?I?m not sure I?d be able to stand up if they were any bigger. But still? I?m still stuck here! How can I get out?!?

?I did some thinking about that, too. The strongest gun I have is a cannon that takes forever to charge up, but it does something like 3/4 of your life bar in one hit. I also get bonus damage if I hit you in the back.?

?Wait, you?re not suggesting?.?

?If I?m right, then it?ll be one hit. Even if it? doesn?t work, at least it?ll be painless.?

?Aaron, honey, this is my life we?re talking about here!?

?I know, sweetheart. I really do. But you don?t want to stay in there forever, do you? We have to do something??

?It?s just? you?re right. Here.? She turned around so that her back was to the robot. ?Just? tell me before you shoot, ok??

?I promise. I love you.?

?I love you, too.?

And with that, the robot began charging. The 30 second charge time was really not that long, although from a game play perspective it might as well have been an eternity. Aaron had never actually seen it go off before, so he had no idea what to expect.

The charge gage was blinking red, and he said in a soft voice, ?It?s time.?

She nodded once, but said nothing.

He fired the weapon.

An intense blue laser fired from the robot?s weapon. It struck her directly in the back, paused for only an instant, and continued out the other side an over the horizon. Mei didn?t even have time to flinch; she began to glow a brilliant blue, and as the glow faded so did she.

The game faded to black and it started to play the victory music and roll the credits, but Aaron couldn?t care less about them. ?Mei! Mei-Xing! Please! Let me know you?re ok!?

?I?m OK, ? said a familiar voice from behind him.

He turned around to see his beautiful fianc?, and the two of them embraced as if they hadn?t seen each other in a decade.

?I was so worried? When you didn?t answer, I thought?.?

?Shhh, it?s alright. I?m here now.?

He looked into her brown eyes and started to cry. The two of them kissed passionately and held each other close.

When the kiss finally ended, he took a step back to get a good look at her. ?Honey, your? your?.?

She did a small hop, which sent her huge breasts into a jiggling frenzy despite the silvery bikini she was wearing. She smiled sweetly at him and said, ?Sweetie, I?m sorry about the sweater?.?

--SIX MONTHS LATER--

Aaron opened the front door to their house. ?Hi, honey! How was your trip??

The 7?4? Mei shrank down to 6?3? to fit through the doorway, but once inside she shot back up to 6?8?. ?It was really good. It?s nice to see where your parents grew up, you know??

Aaron had to get onto his tiptoes in order to kiss his wife, which never failed to get her to giggle. Ever since she found out that she had somehow gained the ability to change her size, she rarely let herself get below 6?. They weren?t even sure what her maximum height was, since the last time she had tried she found herself being far too embarrassed to be larger than 20? and completely naked. All she would tell him was that she was still far, far below whatever her ceiling was.

She gave him a mischievous smile and said, ?These clothes are disposable.?

Those were Aaron?s new favorite words, and were also his cue to step back. She sat down on the floor and began to enlarge. She quickly passed 7?, but as she approached 8? she began to slow down. This was both of their favorite parts, and there was no need to rush it.

The seams on the oversized shirt began to stress, and the threads began to tear. Her already tight shorts became even tighter, and even her socks were starting to develop holes. As she passed 9?, her skin was clearly visible through the large rips in her shorts and shirt. After 10?, she casually brushed off the remaining scraps of cloth. While she could certainly stop there, she loved to grow and there was still some room before she hit the ceiling, so she continued to expand.

At 12? tall, she was taller sitting down than Aaron was standing up. The two lovers kissed again. Aaron just loved the feel of her larger tongue against his.

?Oh, let me get your bags, ?he offered.

?No need.? She gently opened the door, and with one powerful hand grabbed both suitcases and brought them in.

As she stood up, she shrank until she hit their mutual favorite size ? 6?5?. At that height, her enormous breasts were eye-level with Aaron. He took a step forward to welcome her home properly, but she held up a hand to stop him. ?I told my grandmother about her last gift.?

?What did you say??

?Everything. These,? she gestured to her H-cup breasts, ? are kind of hard to hide.?

?Right, right. Well? What did she say??

?She laughed, and said that she thought we would like it.?

?She KNEW that would happen??

?She then gave me this as a wedding gift. She said it was by the same company.?

Aaron took the game disc that she was holding up and examined the cover. Although he couldn?t read Chinese, the makers had badly translated the title into English. ?Super Monster Smash 2!!?

?Wait? is this? the sequel??

Mei-Xing didn?t answer with words. Instead, she smiled sweetly, turned the game on, and handed him the controller.
I tried a different method for describing her growth. Was it good or bad? Did it work for you, or was it too awkward to read? As I said, I really would like to know your honest opinions.
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Unread 01-15-2009   #2
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I always enjoy your work, wussy, and this is no exception. Having said that, I'm not really a fan of describing growth with a rapid succession of numbers. Sure a measurement now and then is great for reference, but too many and it starts to feel a little clinical and inorganic. However, the actual descriptions you wrote were very nice, particularly the parts referencing clothing.
I hope you'll keep writing and posting here!
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Very nice.
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Two thumbs WAY up!!
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I always enjoy your work, wussy, and this is no exception. Having said that, I'm not really a fan of describing growth with a rapid succession of numbers. Sure a measurement now and then is great for reference, but too many and it starts to feel a little clinical and inorganic. However, the actual descriptions you wrote were very nice, particularly the parts referencing clothing.
I hope you'll keep writing and posting here!
Yeah, I was trying to convey the idea of her growing both steadily and rapidly. Normally I write growth scenes like that to be much more flowing (eg. As she ascended to 75', she felt her clothes tighten up further...), but I wanted to see how this would work.

Apparently not well.

No worries, though. Like I said, it was just an experiment. I'm sure I'll get it right one of these days.

That's everyone, for all the kind words.
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Unread 01-16-2009   #6
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Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
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Unread 01-17-2009   #7
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Hey, y'know, some couples are into different things: who am I to judge if some people use PEE's on one another.

Also, dayum, that video game just did a better job at pleasing that guy's wife than he could. Kind of sad, really.
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Unread 01-17-2009   #8
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I rather liked the story, was an interesting read I thought, never got overly wordy either (which is a big problem with some stories).
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I was saving this story to read during the weekend, and I must say it was well worth the wait!!!
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Unread 01-20-2009   #10
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Hey wussy, i really enjoyed it, a very unique story all together. aside from a few grammer issues and one kinda confusing part, it was really tight.

When the robot died to her hands, it was a little confusing when u explained about how she came back with her endowments.

another thing is that when she is 1000 some feet tall, and you are describing her breasts as big as watermelons, I understand that that's proportionally, but its still kinda weird when i first read it.


really nice though.
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Hey, y'know, some couples are into different things: who am I to judge if some people use PEE's on one another.

Also, dayum, that video game just did a better job at pleasing that guy's wife than he could. Kind of sad, really.
Well, only in a video game do you get to fire an energy beam that directly stimulates the pleasure centers of someone's brain!

The PEE thing was just a thought I was going through while thinking of different weapons. I picture the robot to be like something out of Mechwarrior, so while the weapon in Mechwarrior is a PPC (particle projection cannon), my own bastarized version of it became a PEW (pulsed energy weapon). That's kinda funny, but PEE (pulsed energy emitter) is funnier.

It's a stupid, corny joke but I like it.

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Hey wussy, i really enjoyed it, a very unique story all together. aside from a few grammer issues and one kinda confusing part, it was really tight.

When the robot died to her hands, it was a little confusing when u explained about how she came back with her endowments.

another thing is that when she is 1000 some feet tall, and you are describing her breasts as big as watermelons, I understand that that's proportionally, but its still kinda weird when i first read it.


really nice though.
Tell me what my grammar issues are! I'm somewhat of a perfectionist when it comes to my work.

And yeah, it's a little off to describe them as watermelons, but then again, it would also be incorrect to call them "H-cups" either, since that would imply that they're only 8" long. The game's programmers didn't include blimps, or she might've had a more valid comparison.

I thought that this was fairly straightforward, but please tell me what threw you off about it and I'll try to do better in the future:
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Aaron sighed and selected the ?continue? option. At the mech customization screen he began to change his equipment when he heard Mei shouting, ?Oh, this is not fair! This sucks! Hurry up and get back out here already!?

He quickly finished making his choices and launched the robot out of the hangar. When it arrived at the city he could see why she was so upset. The entire city had been completely reset, with all of the buildings, cars, and people intact as if nothing had ever happened. Mei was even back to her ?normal? 50? height.

However, neither her clothes nor her body had changed, so she was still wearing the shiny silver bikini which barely covered her H-cup breasts. She was pouting, and every time she stomped her foot it sent her honeydew-sized breasts jiggling.
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Wussy this is awesome work! I just had to leave a comment and say I love this story! The premise is awesome and I love the characters and the accuracy. Being a big gamer myself I loved the detail you put into it and erotic growth is also a favorite of mine so this is an awesome combo. I felt like the description of the growth was average but still pretty good. I didn't notice any grammar issues big enough to distract me. I think my favorite part was the first few blasts with the Energy Emitter, and the ending was perfect as well, exactly what I was hoping for. Looking forward to your next work!
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