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frice2000 · 03-29-2009

Was an interesting story. I really don't understand the main character that well and where the story ended was a bit of a tease. I wish the transformation hadn't happened so abruptly and been done slowly and over time like your other work. Still seems like it'll be a good start to a new story.

03-29-2009	#2
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: Locked Heart Was an interesting story. I really don't understand the main character that well and where the story ended was a bit of a tease. I wish the transformation hadn't happened so abruptly and been done slowly and over time like your other work. Still seems like it'll be a good start to a new story.