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03-29-2009
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"My way of thanking you"
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 401
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Re: Locked Heart
Was an interesting story. I really don't understand the main character that well and where the story ended was a bit of a tease. I wish the transformation hadn't happened so abruptly and been done slowly and over time like your other work. Still seems like it'll be a good start to a new story.
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