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This is pretty damn good. I love the heaven/hell backstory, but I do think that it perhaps needs to be more clearly defined. It's clear that the angels and demons aren't black-and-white, good and evil stereotypes, and I know the focus isn't on them, but I still like the development given to the non-human characters.
The next step, if you haven't already, is getting it to a wider audience. You need to pay a visit to Fictionmania...
Roll on Chapter 6.
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