Incubusted (Complete)

CNash · 07-19-2006

This is pretty damn good. I love the heaven/hell backstory, but I do think that it perhaps needs to be more clearly defined. It's clear that the angels and demons aren't black-and-white, good and evil stereotypes, and I know the focus isn't on them, but I still like the development given to the non-human characters.

The next step, if you haven't already, is getting it to a wider audience. You need to pay a visit to Fictionmania...

Roll on Chapter 6.

07-19-2006	#24
CNash What would you rather be? Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 714	This is pretty damn good. I love the heaven/hell backstory, but I do think that it perhaps needs to be more clearly defined. It's clear that the angels and demons aren't black-and-white, good and evil stereotypes, and I know the focus isn't on them, but I still like the development given to the non-human characters. The next step, if you haven't already, is getting it to a wider audience. You need to pay a visit to Fictionmania... Roll on Chapter 6. __________________ "And the Lord said, 'Come forth and receive eternal life.' But John came fifth and won a toaster." Avatar by Geckz