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Originally Posted by qzar9999
Maybe--maybe--it could use a little more clothes-bursting growth.
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I'd like to just point out that slow growth material tends to not have clothes ripping/bursting. It would ruin the whole idea of slow growth ^^(in my opinion of course).
On topic though, great work Pseudo. Like I've said to you many times before, I absolutely love this story.
If I was paying 25 dollars for this, I would agree with qzar9999 in terms of that it's a bit short for that much money.
Also, I feel the story developed triumphantly in comparison to all the other stories out there in the genre, but I do feel like it was lacking some real hard-earned sexual action. You included the growth that went along with Bella's heart beat, and that was by far the hottest scene in the story, but it left me craving more as the story went on, but I felt that it never came. Every time she grew after that moment almost wasn't even there in my mind because I wanted to have that same peak of excitement that I was experiencing when that previous scene was running through my head.
Of course this is all just being a critic. You've created a top notch story, and I truly hope we will see more from you very soon. Like I said on Giantess City, If you'd like to hear some ideas I've got written down for new stories, let me know. They can only help spark new ideas!
Have a good one, my friend, and thanks A LOT once again.
--Beetle