Four Types of Reactions (Mini-GTS/Slow/18+)

qzar9999 · 12-06-2009

"...because his work was head and shoulders above the competition..."

Yeah. Since it was pictures of Bella, LITERALLY. *rimshot*

And "Big Bella." Heh. Makes me think of the term "Big Bertha," as applied to massive artillery. Then again I guess Bella does have two big guns. *rimshot* Alright, I'll stop.

And what would I say if I'd paid $25 for a hardcover book of this? "SHIT! That was pretty damn short for $25!" On a more serious note, I mean, you've got teh s3xiness down to an art. Maybe--maybe--it could use a little more clothes-bursting growth, and you still make a few spelling/grammar errors here and there. Other than that I don't really have much in the way of criticism.

12-06-2009	#34
qzar9999 Purveyor of Porn Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gallifrey Posts: 7,071	Re: Four Types of Reactions (Mini-GTS/Slow/18+) "...because his work was head and shoulders above the competition..." Yeah. Since it was pictures of Bella, LITERALLY. rimshot And "Big Bella." Heh. Makes me think of the term "Big Bertha," as applied to massive artillery. Then again I guess Bella does have two big guns. rimshot Alright, I'll stop. And what would I say if I'd paid $25 for a hardcover book of this? "SHIT! That was pretty damn short for $25!" On a more serious note, I mean, you've got teh s3xiness down to an art. Maybe--maybe--it could use a little more clothes-bursting growth, and you still make a few spelling/grammar errors here and there. Other than that I don't really have much in the way of criticism. __________________ Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything.