Re: New stuff!
Kari it's kinda weird to say but it feels really like you understand how a werewolf works or is supposed to. The way you describe the stuggle and the way you build up your scenes is so vivid that I'd believe you already whent through a change yourself!
Maybe I'm exagerating but who cares, story is good and want more of it, although it seems that the whole werewolf deal was supposed to be a point of conflict with Em's student life but now it's getting a little bit too much focus... I don't know, I'm sure you have a climax built up.
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