New stuff!

hexen · 10-28-2012

Kari it's kinda weird to say but it feels really like you understand how a werewolf works or is supposed to. The way you describe the stuggle and the way you build up your scenes is so vivid that I'd believe you already whent through a change yourself!
Maybe I'm exagerating but who cares, story is good and want more of it, although it seems that the whole werewolf deal was supposed to be a point of conflict with Em's student life but now it's getting a little bit too much focus... I don't know, I'm sure you have a climax built up.

10-28-2012	#1
hexen Amateur writer Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 547	Re: New stuff! Kari it's kinda weird to say but it feels really like you understand how a werewolf works or is supposed to. The way you describe the stuggle and the way you build up your scenes is so vivid that I'd believe you already whent through a change yourself! Maybe I'm exagerating but who cares, story is good and want more of it, although it seems that the whole werewolf deal was supposed to be a point of conflict with Em's student life but now it's getting a little bit too much focus... I don't know, I'm sure you have a climax built up. __________________ Check out my FA site, I would appreciate the feedback. http://www.furaffinity.net/user/hexen109/ And may the TF fairy find you and make you rawr!!