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Originally Posted by hexen
So the critter bazooka means something. One thing I think must be said though, but I think you are pretty much aware since you did vary them a little bit, making a story full of TF scenes is cool but gets boring after awhile... at least that's what I learned by doing one of those... anyway, if you are really going to continue try to focus the story more on something else and drive it around the TF scenes instead of into them... or try to vary the TFs enough so that they become worthy for the story itself (or just ignore me and do what you want, which would be the better choice).
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The critter bazooka just looks cool to me, that's all. I found a pic on google image search and put it there.
My interest in these stories really revolves around the transformations so I can't help but focus on them I'm afraid. The TFs are what people came to see, right? So why not have that be the biggest part of it?
I've never really written anything before, and until recently had neither the interest nor courage to actually attempt it. I was pleased to see the positive responses to my last story at least. But if they're getting boring maybe I should just take a break from doing them.