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Amateur writer
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 547
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Re: Climate Change (werewolf story)
So the critter bazooka means something. One thing I think must be said though, but I think you are pretty much aware since you did vary them a little bit, making a story full of TF scenes is cool but gets boring after awhile... at least that's what I learned by doing one of those... anyway, if you are really going to continue try to focus the story more on something else and drive it around the TF scenes instead of into them... or try to vary the TFs enough so that they become worthy for the story itself (or just ignore me and do what you want, which would be the better choice).
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