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Unread 01-11-2014   #1
Darkish
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Re: A Little Housework Pt1 MY FIRST STORY! OHYEAH!

What can I say: Hot as fuck!

Nicely written, great and fast start, this is a great shrinking story, pure fun.

Maybe you could have taken a tiny bit more time after the first drops were poured, a slightly slower begin of the shrinking. But hey, well done. Looking forward to more of your writing
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