A Little Housework Pt1 MY FIRST STORY! OHYEAH!

[Darkish]

What can I say: Hot as fuck!

Nicely written, great and fast start, this is a great shrinking story, pure fun.

Maybe you could have taken a tiny bit more time after the first drops were poured, a slightly slower begin of the shrinking. But hey, well done. Looking forward to more of your writing

[OhZone]

Originally Posted by Darkish

What can I say: Hot as fuck!

Nicely written, great and fast start, this is a great shrinking story, pure fun.

Maybe you could have taken a tiny bit more time after the first drops were poured, a slightly slower begin of the shrinking. But hey, well done. Looking forward to more of your writing

Thank you! Don't worry. Although the shrinking could have been slower at first, it is no where near done!

OHYEAH!

Also, my next RP adaptation will be have a little more build up.