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Originally Posted by Darkish
What can I say: Hot as fuck! 
Nicely written, great and fast start, this is a great shrinking story, pure fun.
Maybe you could have taken a tiny bit more time after the first drops were poured, a slightly slower begin of the shrinking. But hey, well done. Looking forward to more of your writing  |
Thank you! Don't worry. Although the shrinking could have been slower at first, it is no where near done!
OHYEAH!
Also, my next RP adaptation will be have a little more build up.