I tried drawing a BE pic.

[Muhznit]

So basically, this is the result of me using my second head for something more than what I usually use it for. The pop she has in her mouth is the culprit to the expansion here.

Originally Posted by Muhznit

These "M-Pops" (Pronounced Mmmm-pops) are a form of alchemy-based drug found in the black market. These are sweet milk-based popsicles in vanilla, chocolate, strawberry, caramel, and cinnamony flavors. Their primary alchemical effects are rather fast breast expansion accompanied by lactation soon after. While slurping one, girls will obsessively lick it in the naughtiest ways possible, masturbate, strip, moan, or a mix of all of them. Sharing it multiplies its strength, so two girls sharing one may quickly change into a passionate makeout or a sexy catfight. All effects are normally temporary, but due to its popularity in the black market and freely disclosed formula within, a few modifications to the original recipe can make its primary effects permanent. Other variants have been found that causes it to become highly addicting, to promote penis growth in males, or even cause genderswaps of all kinds.

I should've put more effort into this maybe, but shit hit the fan when Photoshop started giving me memory leak problems. I still have the original .PSD, the vectors and lineart within and everything (except the lactation), but meh. I tried drawing, scanning, vectoring, and coloring something erotic. I somewhat succeeded by my standards... but then again, I find that I like Mamabliss' style, so that says a lot about how easily something can pass.

I'd inb4 the hand holding the pop, the head, and the overall shading in general, but the rule of inb4 forbids the OP from its usage. Then again, we're not on 4chan. inb4 the aforementioned issues.

[HinduSpartan]

I say this post is a win

[quefue]

Originally Posted by HinduSpartan

I say this post is a win

Second

[Kojiro Highwind]

Must... resist... full.. critiquing.. power....

Ugh...


The neck is off center.
One arm is shorter than the other.
The longer arm has a long forearm and a short upper arm.
The short arm looks thin compared to the long arm.
The hair looks like it is made of a cardboard cut out and just pasted on.
The fingers on the visible hand look like nubs.

Sorry.... I just can't help but tear something apart lately in art when people just say that it's good when it isn't. Even if it is just fap material.......

Keep on drawing.. you'll get better. I just had to.... balance the praise with some real critiquing.....

( I did hold back a lot >.>)

* wanders off to next target.*

[Muhznit]

Originally Posted by Kojiro Highwind

Must... resist... full.. critiquing.. power....

Ugh...


The neck is off center.
One arm is shorter than the other.
The longer arm has a long forearm and a short upper arm.
The short arm looks thin compared to the long arm.
The hair looks like it is made of a cardboard cut out and just pasted on.
The fingers on the visible hand look like nubs.

Sorry.... I just can't help but tear something apart lately in art when people just say that it's good when it isn't. Even if it is just fap material.......

Keep on drawing.. you'll get better. I just had to.... balance the praise with some real critiquing.....

( I did hold back a lot >.>)

* wanders off to next target.*

Normally I would say "go nuts with critique, bro", but since I have no real intention of working on this any more than I have (blame photoshop having mental problems due to all the adjustment/fill layers I had) It's kind of pointless. I understand your need to critique in the way you do, so it's no real problem. I had it coming anyways.

[anatolii]

Dont give up looked nice, as for me im still trying and haveing difficulty drawing in proportions or w/e its called just remember u haz skillz

May The Breast Expanding Force Be With U!

[Tezado432]

Nice art.

[Metatron]

Your coloring is solid well done.
I will not rehash the areas for improvement already said but I will say for process you should draw some sort of shake lines around the breasts, torn clothing, or something that denotes a change in her breast size. While the top she has on looks small she could still fit into it I would say make it a bit tighter.
over all I give it a 4.5/5

[Gaffenheimer]

Nice one, especially since it's your first.

[Zman]

I've actually seen much worse art posted on this forum, so I'm going to give some kudos for actually posting a full color picture that isn't horrible to look at. Drawing the human body is very difficult to draw accurately and you would do well to purchase book on art instruction. It could be a book on how to draw Manga or a book on drawing the human anatomy, it really doesn't matter. But you need to practice drawing, to get better and these art instruction books will help you improve your drawing skills.

[CK01]

Nice pic, always good to see new faces

[blarxy12]

keep practicing bro, you're really good so far