I tried drawing a BE pic.

Kojiro Highwind · 08-22-2009

Must... resist... full.. critiquing.. power....

Ugh...

The neck is off center.
One arm is shorter than the other.
The longer arm has a long forearm and a short upper arm.
The short arm looks thin compared to the long arm.
The hair looks like it is made of a cardboard cut out and just pasted on.
The fingers on the visible hand look like nubs.

Sorry.... I just can't help but tear something apart lately in art when people just say that it's good when it isn't. Even if it is just fap material.......

Keep on drawing.. you'll get better. I just had to.... balance the praise with some real critiquing.....

( I did hold back a lot >.>)

* wanders off to next target.*

08-22-2009	#4
Kojiro Highwind Screwy Neko Join Date: May 2005 Location: In the deep recessives of my manga mind Posts: 2,989	Re: I tried drawing a BE pic. Must... resist... full.. critiquing.. power.... Ugh... The neck is off center. One arm is shorter than the other. The longer arm has a long forearm and a short upper arm. The short arm looks thin compared to the long arm. The hair looks like it is made of a cardboard cut out and just pasted on. The fingers on the visible hand look like nubs. Sorry.... I just can't help but tear something apart lately in art when people just say that it's good when it isn't. Even if it is just fap material....... Keep on drawing.. you'll get better. I just had to.... balance the praise with some real critiquing..... ( I did hold back a lot >.>) * wanders off to next target.* __________________ Main DA account here