Midna BE Story

[MagicWritings]

Originally Posted by geno13

- Very very good
- That sounds interesting, though it may take away a little bit of the mystery surrounding it if we know too much about what it thinks.

Much appreciated.

Yeah, as you can see I describe the curse's thoughts on the occasion. I just wondered if it bothered anyone.

Originally Posted by Lock

Well done, Magic my boy! Bravo!

Thank you!

Originally Posted by DarkSage8

*walks out of the shadows applauding* Bravo, Magic, Bravo! This is precisely the quality of AP I had hoped to see with Saria. Keep it going man!

Man...if only I wasn't so poor, I could afford a commission to go with this. A man can dream though...a man can dream.

Thank you very much. I hope I can keep it up.

Grim made some artwork around the story. I wonder if he's still around and cares about this story? Might have to send him a note, but I'm kind of afraid he's angry 'cause of my year-long break.

Originally Posted by Daichi Azure

A) yes it was nice and drawn out for added effect
B) of course, every good story needs to have the villians input every once and a while to add the dark side into it....oh wait did i make a small star wars joke?

Thank you. And thanks for your opinion on the curse's thoughts and whatever.

Originally Posted by HC-911

Awesome work, Magic. Love how the Saria arc is looking. Going with the tree stump, novel idea.

What I'm wondering is . . . if these are other worlds.. are there other Links? Other Zeldas? To include them would be confusing, but how would you not? Other than just avoiding Hyrule Castle Town in (Ocarina of Time World)?

I'm merely curious what your take on that is, really.

All in all, I'm impressed.

Those Ruto ideas going around... I've never been a fan of TF ideas myself, but moreso I agree with Magic, I can't see a way to link it together.

I like Ruto as a character though, second only to Midna really, I thought the whole tomboy sprouting into one foxy fish and suddenly coming onto her fiance, the dumbfounded adult Link, was a neat twist.

But... how would you apply it to this story? That... I can't figure out. But truth be told (and since you mentioned the other Sage locations) I'd rather Ruto over Impa. AHAHAHAHA. *ahem!*

So . . . Cremia, Anju, Ilia and Lulu have been all wrapped up huh? Leaving only Nabooru and Saria correct?

Forgive me if I seem out of bounds, but although the story's kinda wrapping up, you just got back . . . so, it kinda leaves me wondering how much is left of this story. I'm just curious.

BTW, ya recognize my name, Magic?



Anyways, glad you decided to resume this story!

Thank you!

Whether or not I include other Links/Zeldas depends solely on timeline and location. I could engineer in Link returning from Termina if you guys want him in the Saria story arc.

As for Zelda, I could potentially have any of them appear, but since Link and Midna are kind of the focus of the story I figured it might be best to curse TP Zelda, if any.

Ruto's a pretty nice character, yeah, but the transformation ideas would all be more fitting for a story by itself.
I dunno if I want Ruto to transform to a Hylian, 'cause I am kind of a Zora fan. So I'll have to give that some more thought later.

Whether or not the story is almost over really depends. There's many more arcs we could set up. If you guys want it to go on, I doubt I'll be done any time soon.

As for your name, I think I recognize it, but my memory's a little vague.