A Little Housework Pt1 MY FIRST STORY! OHYEAH!

Darkish · 01-11-2014

What can I say: Hot as fuck!

Nicely written, great and fast start, this is a great shrinking story, pure fun.

Maybe you could have taken a tiny bit more time after the first drops were poured, a slightly slower begin of the shrinking. But hey, well done. Looking forward to more of your writing

01-11-2014	#7
Darkish Process Fan Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 32	Re: A Little Housework Pt1 MY FIRST STORY! OHYEAH! What can I say: Hot as fuck! Nicely written, great and fast start, this is a great shrinking story, pure fun. Maybe you could have taken a tiny bit more time after the first drops were poured, a slightly slower begin of the shrinking. But hey, well done. Looking forward to more of your writing

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