I tried drawing a BE pic.

Metatron · 08-24-2009

Your coloring is solid well done.
I will not rehash the areas for improvement already said but I will say for process you should draw some sort of shake lines around the breasts, torn clothing, or something that denotes a change in her breast size. While the top she has on looks small she could still fit into it I would say make it a bit tighter.
over all I give it a 4.5/5

08-24-2009	#8
Metatron Alea iacta est Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,056	Re: I tried drawing a BE pic. Your coloring is solid well done. I will not rehash the areas for improvement already said but I will say for process you should draw some sort of shake lines around the breasts, torn clothing, or something that denotes a change in her breast size. While the top she has on looks small she could still fit into it I would say make it a bit tighter. over all I give it a 4.5/5

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