For Sucht 17 (has riped cloths in it)

Ow that : )
Smile Well I did that for how rude he is to allot of people on this forum. He just seems to be pissed off all the time. I guess I'm a bad guy to lol.

[bacattack]

I'm almost 20 and I can't draw at all. Age means almost nothing when it comes to skill level.

Note I said 'almost' for hopefully-obvious reasons. A 10-year-old will not be able to draw nor write as well as a 19-year-old. Art takes maturity as well as pure skill. However, even if I practiced drawing for a year I doubt I could get to the level Wigit is at right now (best I can do . . . stick figures.) Experience matters.

To be blunt . . . Wigit, the picture feels a bit cluttered. You might have been better off dividing it into two sections.

[Kojiro Highwind]

For some constructive criticism...... the head looks like it missing part of the top and back of the skull for it kinda looks like if that part is either missing or caved in. The breasts are really high on the chest almost high enough to look like there attached to the collar bone or upper part of the shoulder and the bewbs also lool like there attached to the muscle on the back section of the armpits. The moon looks halfassed... ...mmm you can use a moon as a reference and you could use a less heavy line for details like the surface of the moon ( if you were to redraw it) or the clothes.

The picture isn't all that great but like others said before me Drawing takes time to develope. Sure i didnt really say anything good about this picture but i pointed out the flaws that need to be worked on instead of saying "OMG you teh sux lolz"

I hope you don't take this bad like other people i tried to help in the past on devart >_> * Hides from potential hurty projectile*

Kojiro Highwind this is actually the kind of response I'm looking for. I need people to helpfully critics so I can improve myself. I'm gonna re draw this one I just need practice. Tell me what looks off and what you like so I can get better.

[grtcaligal]

Wigit, check your PM box.

[Neko KK]

Wigit, sorry, i thought you were 15
and seriously, watch out, your ass is now grass
in b4 shitstorm
also
INCOMING SHITSTORM

[grtcaligal]

Take a breather people. We have an artist just starting out who needs help. Kojiro and myself have already passed along a few words of advice. No need to bury him. New content is always a good thing.

After all, there is a process to making stuff for the process

What is going on why is my ass grass how did i get these enemies where am I Who's that sitting in my chair ow mama this surly is a dream.

[Kojiro Highwind]

Originally Posted by Wigit

Kojiro Highwind this is actually the kind of response I'm looking for. I need people to helpfully critics so I can improve myself. I'm gonna re draw this one I just need practice. Tell me what looks off and what you like so I can get better.

Heh ^^ your welcome ^^ I usually like to give advice but lots of times i dunno what exactly to say so i tend to say nothin when those times come up >_>. Luckily enough i knew what to say here XD. Ill try to keep up with the comments for ya since you seem to have a passion for self improvement ^_^

And don't expect any shit storm to head your way.... i dunno why they start up randomly though <_<

Ow well ^^ sicks and stones right. I need to get good quick before basic training so that when I'm out I can start right back up again. So be cruel buddy.

[Kojiro Highwind]

Like Simon from American Idol cruel? ( i friggin hate that sheep herding show but i like what i hear from him sometimes) Or maybe Lock-you-up-in-straight-jacket-while-forcing-you-to-listen-to-Barney's-theme-song-while-receiving-a-hot-greatsword-Enema-from-Nightmare type of cruel?

More like using card board to slit open holes in every inch of my body, then roping me to a truck and dragging me through a plane of glass and salt then shoving a florescent light bulb in my urethra and crushing it with a glass hammer. Just about that brutal...... In the right way of coarse.