The Foxy Lady: female werefox transformation comic!

SoylentOrange · 09-10-2007

It was okay. The poser parts were fine, though you could stand to maybe frame the stuff a bit better- a few lines of panels showing each part of the TF might be nice froma process standpoint, but in terms of making a comic it's pretty boring visually.

The writing stinks. You seem to use the same words over and over, in very short, jarring sentances. if this is actually supposed to be a story, or some oher kind of narrative, you need to make the sentances flow into one another more often. And there were several parts where the apparent attempt at rhyming went awry.

All in all, I'd give it maybe a 5/10. IF you're going to try to make something in poser, you need to put the effort to distinguish it from the 5,000 other easily thrown-together Poser models.

View Poll Results: What did you think of the comic?
Great	17	21.25%
Good	10	12.50%
Ok	21	26.25%
Fair	7	8.75%
Could have been better.	23	28.75%
I love muscular female werefoxes.	8	10.00%
I hated it.	11	13.75%
I liked the writing.	5	6.25%
I hated the writing.	7	8.75%
I liked the pinup, couple and love scene shots.	4	5.00%
Multiple Choice Poll. Voters: 80. You may not vote on this poll

09-10-2007	#7
SoylentOrange Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 4,920	It was okay. The poser parts were fine, though you could stand to maybe frame the stuff a bit better- a few lines of panels showing each part of the TF might be nice froma process standpoint, but in terms of making a comic it's pretty boring visually. The writing stinks. You seem to use the same words over and over, in very short, jarring sentances. if this is actually supposed to be a story, or some oher kind of narrative, you need to make the sentances flow into one another more often. And there were several parts where the apparent attempt at rhyming went awry. All in all, I'd give it maybe a 5/10. IF you're going to try to make something in poser, you need to put the effort to distinguish it from the 5,000 other easily thrown-together Poser models.