Night/N647 Commission Comic

Greenish_Funk · 10-09-2007

I rather enjoy your artwork/sequences night. This particular sequence however....

...is no exception.

You have growth, you have BE, you have breasts pressed against one another, gold stars all around.

As for constructive criticism, the font size and frames change after page one was a little weird. After page one was up (but before page two) I figure the rest of the story was going to be done in that fashion, so seeing page two made me go 'oh...*shrugs* ok'. The font size in the page 2 and 3 are also eye squinting tiny.

Also, I feel page two would have benefited a little bit with an extra frame. Have Inoue say a little something, then next frame have her grow.

But again, those are nit picks. Overall it's a great (albeit kinda short) sequence. Thumbs up all around.

10-09-2007	#28
Greenish_Funk 2? Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 38	I rather enjoy your artwork/sequences night. This particular sequence however.... ...is no exception. You have growth, you have BE, you have breasts pressed against one another, gold stars all around. As for constructive criticism, the font size and frames change after page one was a little weird. After page one was up (but before page two) I figure the rest of the story was going to be done in that fashion, so seeing page two made me go 'oh...shrugs ok'. The font size in the page 2 and 3 are also eye squinting tiny. Also, I feel page two would have benefited a little bit with an extra frame. Have Inoue say a little something, then next frame have her grow. But again, those are nit picks. Overall it's a great (albeit kinda short) sequence. Thumbs up all around.