Comic Brainstorming

I've seen some weird things. I've also been to a haunted movie theater and vacationed in a haunted beach house. I can tell if someone is near or if a TV is turned on as well. Weirdest thing I've ever seen was a floating newspaper. I'm talking abouta rolled up newspaper hovering.

[Sutibaru]

Enough with the stories about ghosts and what not. Ghosts are not even related to the story.

[Sutibaru]

Subi was a biologically enhanced embrio created by a large organization. Hoping to create an kinetic soldier, they finally perfected in giving her Biokinesis while she was still in her mother's womb. Her mother fearing for Subi's safety, used her own power to send the baby into another woman's womb. Saving Subi from being a weapon.

While growing up, Subi showed some powers over the years. (Thinking of occurances here)

Here is where the main plot is. Subi is training to become a nurse. (people always seemed to get better faster when she was around) She goes out with a friend(s) to the shopping center one day and decides to buy an emerald necklace. (emeralds are supposed to enhance an biokinetic's power)

Subi always knew that she had a power, but she soon notices her power showings more and more.

Yet she gives off kinetic waves that are becoming stronger and stronger. The dark organization can detect her kinetic waves.

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That is pretty much the plotline for my comic.
Although it seems pretty serious, don't worry, there will be a lot of tranformations. Especially Subi. She has a fixation/obsession with breasts. ^_^

[Mrblond]

I read the thread and got to thinking of titles...
Suggestions: Green Blood, Emerald Nurse, or Green (x) referring to the emerald catalyst or
Name of organization's Return
I like Emerald Nurse but seeing your work, hey do what you will

[Quadhouse]

[QUOTE=While growing up, Subi showed some powers over the years. (Thinking of occurances here)

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A bully's favorite victim having an incredible growth spurt making him/her taller/more devolped. Older women who were kind to her, suddenly looking years younger without having cosmetic surgery. Her mother's breasts produced more milk than Subi could drink. (Just how early did these occurances, occur?) Kind, friendly babysitters developing faster and more than expected, while unattentive babysitters body's lost development.

That's all I can think of right now.

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Yeah, Quadhouse is onto something there.

People that are nice to Subi get positive enhancements...

Maybe a friend finds a perfect dress for something but she's not tall enough/ bosomy enough to fit in it but then as if by magic, it fits like a glove.

Or maybe one of her friends is going to be in a regional sports championship but feels she's the runt of the team. Or something even more simple like Subi's friend confiding she envies Subi's level of development and then TADA. etc.

Perhaps she can have dreams where she changes: BE/FMG/TF etc. and she thinks they're all super realistic and is kind of confused as to why her PJs are all stretched.

I think you also need to establish a reason for Subi's breast obsession. Generally speaking, it would be caused by Subi loving/respecting/associating power wtih someone with large breasts. So you could maybe have a busty friend of the family, adoptive sister that kind of thing.

[Sutibaru]

I was planning on having Subi to have a younger sister. (sister in law i guess since her mother is not really her mother even if she gave birth to her 0_0)

But thanks for the ideas, they are giving be more of a story to work with.

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Step-sister surely? Although, given the manner of Subi's birth - it seems unlikely that anyone would know.

Will Subi's sister twig as to her sister's abilities... in fact, will Subi tell people or try and keep her growing powers a secret?

Also - if I might suggest, perhaps the evil organisation has maybe got some appropriate foil for Subi who can be the person that she fights with. Maybe Subi eventually wins her around or something.

[SoylentOrange]

The prophet is wise and his words should be heeded.

[Sutibaru]

Subi will probably keep her powers as much of a secret as she can. Remember that she does not have complete control over her powers. Her imagination probably would once and a while trigger something to happen.

The evil organization will be sending out other subjects to find her since they do not know an exact pinpoint of her location when she used her kinetic power.

I havent thought of the enemy subjects, but probably most of them will be female. ^_^

[SdazVarence]

Hey Suti, For the enemy concept......female villians of the day yes....but why not theme some of them around some sort of hentai element? Well you probably wouldnt be able to do much............though you could have some of them have like some sort of animal transformation or something, and hell if you have some do some major growthage, you can pull a bit of a Godzilla with that or even spoof mecha Anime.....Possibilities are endless...

Course the basic aproach is that each villian could have some sort of pyschic abilities that reflect some things Subi can do but either on a minor scale, or refined to just one particular aspect. The Ultimate villian could be just like Subi, only like 100 times more advanced

[Sutibaru]

I will not degrade this comic to be a simple spoof or hentai.

The subjects will have their own powers of some sort. I haven't thought into them yet.