New TF Story - Page 8

SkruLuce · 03-29-2008

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Originally Posted by walter_sullivan

oh come on now, comparing it to rape is a little extreme don't you think?
besides, she wants it (if you do it right) and wanting it is the difference between rape and not rape.
bah. not a good argument. forget it. at least i tried.

Making her want it through mental changes is the exact same thing as rape. In fact, in some rape cases the woman, though she hates what is happening to her, still gets aroused from the sensations and may 'want it' near the end, though afterward she'll come back to her senses. So, no, wanting it is not the difference between rape and consensual sex. Agreeing to it before hand (hence, 'consensual') with a clear, sober mind is not rape. Agreeing while in an altered state is rape.

walter_sullivan · 03-30-2008

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Originally Posted by SkruLuce

Making her want it through mental changes is the exact same thing as rape. In fact, in some rape cases the woman, though she hates what is happening to her, still gets aroused from the sensations and may 'want it' near the end, though afterward she'll come back to her senses. So, no, wanting it is not the difference between rape and consensual sex. Agreeing to it before hand (hence, 'consensual') with a clear, sober mind is not rape. Agreeing while in an altered state is rape.

yeah, that's why i said "not a good argument." that my point wasn't good.
well, if we get really technical about it, a physical transformation could be considered rape as well.

SkruLuce · 03-30-2008

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Originally Posted by walter_sullivan

yeah, that's why i said "not a good argument." that my point wasn't good.
well, if we get really technical about it, a physical transformation could be considered rape as well.

...I don't see how. Unless the subject didn't want to be transformed in the first place.

Esquire · 03-31-2008

They generally don't.

geneticks · 05-24-2008

This thread shall not be forgotten...
So any news on the progress of the story Soylent ? Or did you abandon it ?
I'm eager to read more. Who else is ?

SoylentOrange · 05-24-2008

*I'm* certainly eager to see more, but all my free writing time these days is tied up with Juggalos. I'll get back to it one of tese days, I swear, but with all the fabulous art Hmm! keep putting out of the various waitresses, I can't help myself!

Lord T Hawkeye · 05-24-2008

Darth Vader voice: Impressive...

Really, it's not often I'm treated to such a detailed and original story. Keep up the good work. I eagerly await more.

Something occured to me now that I think about your request for character ideas. How about this?

Someone close to Mary, a relative or friend or otherwise is suffering from an incurable illness and Mary sees an opportunity to put The Flesh's abilities to a good use (that is if she can pull it off with the proper amount of discrecion)

Type of transformation? Hmm...Katie seems to have been landed as Mary's refreshment table and someone has already thought of a "soldier" type, what if this person got a "breeder" type role? I have noticed the lair building process seems kinda slow so such a subordinate to speed along the process might make sense.

Just throwing out ideas.

06-19-2008

Very interesting. I never knew tentacles could be so... useful.

I really enjoy reading this wonderfully written story. Description and plot development are really well played.

I know you have a long list of victims to transform, but would you mind considering this one?

Name: Daniel, "Dan" for short
age:16 gender:male

general appearance: Medium build, thick hands, 5' 7" tall, 165 lbs., dyed-blue short spiky hair, sapphire blue eyes, light skin tone. usually wears a dirty old and worn blue jeans with a ripped up dirty white shirt.

vague personality: Dan is self conscious about his appearance. He tries very hard to look appropriately in public. which is very hard when he lost his home. behind his piercing eyes is a glint of remorse and sorrow. but feeling bad about it now won't bring food to his stomach. he developed a sharp wit and fast reflexes while he was on the streets. he holds a health respect for life.

short history: Dan's parents had divorced 11 years later after he was born. He was left with his abusive father while his mother went over seas. after 3 years of taking beatings from his father, Daniel, in a fit of rage, killed his father and ran away in his adrenaline. while on the streets begging for food, a small gang welcomed him into their ranks. he is the youngest of all the gang members. while still new to the life of thugs, he still holds to the morals he learned for himself about life.

moment of tf: during on of the gangs muggings. He and 2-3 others find and corner Mary in an alley way. During the confrontation between Mary and the thugs. Daniel senses danger and tries to convince the others to let Mary go. seeing this as a sign of weakness the thugs knock him unconscious (at least they think they do). The Body defends Mary from the 'predators'/thugs and changes Daniel's 'friends' into The Flesh. Dan lies deathly still hoping that 'the monster' (Mary) will also think he's unconscious and leave before he gets the same fate as his comrades. Mary debates with The Body to change the boy into a predator for them instead of eating him. The Body sourly agrees. thinking ahead, Mary thinks of a body to sneak him from the alley way to her apartment.

TF into: humanoid rapter with a prehensile tail. four scaly toned arms with three talon like fingers. black spines from the top of his head to the tip of his tail. light and agile with the ability to turn 'invisible' (think uber chameleon) The coloration of the scales is a swirl of blue and green. with the same piercing blue eyes.

that was just off the top of my head. if you'd like more description in the personality or history just say so.

GenYun · 06-20-2008

I can't help but notice that's a male character sheet and transformation, albeit a well written one, : /

06-20-2008

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Originally Posted by GenYun

I can't help but notice that's a male character sheet and transformation, albeit a well written one, : /

Is that a good thing or a bad thing? being a character sheet and all. it just helps organize my random thoughts.

eh, well it doesn't have to be male. I just thought to get in more details so Soylent doesn't have to do all the work. if it were a real character sheet, by my standards, it would also have skills and abilities in both human and Flesh form. with maybe a story of how he acts around others. and if it were and RP sheet it probably would have strengths and weaknesses.

But the Flesh form of Dan is nothing compared to the inventive and creative ideas of 'Plop plop fizz fizz' and his random lackeys.

geneticks · 06-20-2008

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Originally Posted by mrcellophane

Is that a good thing or a bad thing?

This board is mainly focusing on female transformations. (don't worry, maybe you didn't know ^_^)

06-20-2008

now that you mention it, it does seem one sided here. meh everyone has their preference. I've been told that variety is the spice in life. now I'm not saying to do more male manipulations... just... I don't know... make them non gendered, but still masculine.

blah I better stop while I'm behind.

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05-24-2008	#90
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05-24-2008	#91
Lord T Hawkeye It's play time! Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 1,183	Re: New TF Story Darth Vader voice: Impressive... Really, it's not often I'm treated to such a detailed and original story. Keep up the good work. I eagerly await more. Something occured to me now that I think about your request for character ideas. How about this? Someone close to Mary, a relative or friend or otherwise is suffering from an incurable illness and Mary sees an opportunity to put The Flesh's abilities to a good use (that is if she can pull it off with the proper amount of discrecion) Type of transformation? Hmm...Katie seems to have been landed as Mary's refreshment table and someone has already thought of a "soldier" type, what if this person got a "breeder" type role? I have noticed the lair building process seems kinda slow so such a subordinate to speed along the process might make sense. Just throwing out ideas. __________________ My stories Cat girl sorceresses, tentacled doctors, maid robots and a doll super hero. What more could you ask for? Hey Dollyteers! Dolly's got herself a comic now! Go check it out! Last edited by Lord T Hawkeye; 05-24-2008 at 08:32 PM.

06-19-2008	#92
mrcellophane Guest Posts: n/a	Re: New TF Story Very interesting. I never knew tentacles could be so... useful. I really enjoy reading this wonderfully written story. Description and plot development are really well played. I know you have a long list of victims to transform, but would you mind considering this one? Name: Daniel, "Dan" for short age:16 gender:male general appearance: Medium build, thick hands, 5' 7" tall, 165 lbs., dyed-blue short spiky hair, sapphire blue eyes, light skin tone. usually wears a dirty old and worn blue jeans with a ripped up dirty white shirt. vague personality: Dan is self conscious about his appearance. He tries very hard to look appropriately in public. which is very hard when he lost his home. behind his piercing eyes is a glint of remorse and sorrow. but feeling bad about it now won't bring food to his stomach. he developed a sharp wit and fast reflexes while he was on the streets. he holds a health respect for life. short history: Dan's parents had divorced 11 years later after he was born. He was left with his abusive father while his mother went over seas. after 3 years of taking beatings from his father, Daniel, in a fit of rage, killed his father and ran away in his adrenaline. while on the streets begging for food, a small gang welcomed him into their ranks. he is the youngest of all the gang members. while still new to the life of thugs, he still holds to the morals he learned for himself about life. moment of tf: during on of the gangs muggings. He and 2-3 others find and corner Mary in an alley way. During the confrontation between Mary and the thugs. Daniel senses danger and tries to convince the others to let Mary go. seeing this as a sign of weakness the thugs knock him unconscious (at least they think they do). The Body defends Mary from the 'predators'/thugs and changes Daniel's 'friends' into The Flesh. Dan lies deathly still hoping that 'the monster' (Mary) will also think he's unconscious and leave before he gets the same fate as his comrades. Mary debates with The Body to change the boy into a predator for them instead of eating him. The Body sourly agrees. thinking ahead, Mary thinks of a body to sneak him from the alley way to her apartment. TF into: humanoid rapter with a prehensile tail. four scaly toned arms with three talon like fingers. black spines from the top of his head to the tip of his tail. light and agile with the ability to turn 'invisible' (think uber chameleon) The coloration of the scales is a swirl of blue and green. with the same piercing blue eyes. that was just off the top of my head. if you'd like more description in the personality or history just say so.

06-20-2008	#93
GenYun Ye Olde 3D Artiste Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 1,714	Re: New TF Story I can't help but notice that's a male character sheet and transformation, albeit a well written one, : /

06-20-2008	#96
mrcellophane Guest Posts: n/a	Re: New TF Story now that you mention it, it does seem one sided here. meh everyone has their preference. I've been told that variety is the spice in life. now I'm not saying to do more male manipulations... just... I don't know... make them non gendered, but still masculine. blah I better stop while I'm behind.