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[YouDontWantToKnow]

Well, I think it's only logical, given that Usagi is a glutton in both the manga and anime. The other girls COULD concievibly gain weight, but they'd have to lose it successfully, unlike Usagi, who is destined to continue gaining. I'll update the rules a bit to make them more accomidating for creativity.

EDIT: Rules have been updated.

[B-mage]

Originally Posted by YouDontWantToKnow

Well, I think it's only logical, given that Usagi is a glutton in both the manga and anime. The other girls COULD concievibly gain weight, but they'd have to lose it successfully, unlike Usagi, who is destined to continue gaining. I'll update the rules a bit to make them more accomidating for creativity.

Sorry but I still disagree that they would successfully lose weight. Granted under normal circumstanses they would try, but as we all know weight loss is a tricky buisness often prone to failure (and it's much more likely with a glutton like Usagi around to temp the girls back to calories) Also any plot involving a scheme by their foes to cause weight gain the circumstances would not be normal where the girls may want to lose weight but unable.

I guess what I'm getting at is story guide lines are best used for keeping the story from reaching areas that would be to unbeliveable or ruin the overall story. In my opinion you're using them to focus the gain on the girl you like the most while requiring all the other girls to only be used for plot development then fall to the wayside and lose the weight thus removing them as leads in a story about weight gain.

Since it's in their nature to lose the wieght any good author would either have them trying to lose weight or write the plot so they are unaware of their gain or unable to stop it, no decent author would change the personailtys of the other girls to just gain without care like Usagi.

What you want is for authors to focus on Usagi, which is fine. But again I feel you're limiting authors by dictating who may and may not gain sucsesfully. For what you want to work Usagi would have to be seperated from everyone in an isolated place where only plot involving her would matter (say she's captured and force feed). But in the world in which she exists there is a full cast of characters to interact with and they all have thier own personaities. If you want full rich chapters with new and exiting plot twists you have to let authors dictate what course the plot will take. Setting the guidlines you have tie the hands of many authors as to what they are free to do, only a hand full of authors who post in female weight gain stories can manage an interesting plot under such restictions and even then it's not intereating to post in a story where they are prohibites to do certain things.

I'm not trying to make you change, I'm just warning you that to many rules scares authors away. I personaly wouldn't mind posting if I was free to add other girls to the mix in plots where they either can't control their eating, or can't lose weight with Usagi constantly shoving food in front of them. Subseqeuntly that means they will not be able to lose weight. Likely Usagi would be the only one gaining constantly with most girls at a much slower pace due to their resistance.