Comic Brainstorming

GearRyu · 02-19-2006

I like both sketches a lot. :-D
Midori definitely comes across as evil; the "Kill" on her T-shirt goes a long way toward that. I like her dynamic pose, as though she is preparing to attack somebody. Although this may come across as an odd complaint, her breasts are a bit on the large side (playing for the "opposite of Subi-chan", she might best be flat-chested)

Now the leader... now that guy makes me think of GTO! Brawny, good-looking, and seemingly indifferent, with many a battle scar. I love the expressoin on his face, and his pose. Very good!

02-19-2006	#31
GearRyu Be Amused Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 1,712	I like both sketches a lot. :-D Midori definitely comes across as evil; the "Kill" on her T-shirt goes a long way toward that. I like her dynamic pose, as though she is preparing to attack somebody. Although this may come across as an odd complaint, her breasts are a bit on the large side (playing for the "opposite of Subi-chan", she might best be flat-chested) Now the leader... now that guy makes me think of GTO! Brawny, good-looking, and seemingly indifferent, with many a battle scar. I love the expressoin on his face, and his pose. Very good! __________________ Now accepting story commissions. My TG/BE/TF/SW story, "The Reluctant Salesman": http://www.process-productions.com/f...ad.php?t=20765 My BE/MG/GTS story, "The Perfect Evolution": http://www.process-productions.com/f...fect+evolution My TG/BE Story, "Incubusted": http://www.process-productions.com/f...ght=incubusted