My first attempt. Foxgirl TF+BE storyishthing

So ya. Long time lurker, first time poster...I finally found a friend who likes TF and I wrote a short thing for her, thought I'd post it on here before deleting it so no one finds out my secret. ::Ninja::

Also includes a kinda-sorta squidish TF. >_>

I hope you enjoy...Very sexual. ._.;

"Uhn..." Shiori moaned as she woke up. The last thing she had remembered was something pricking her neck, and then she passed out. She went to rub her neck when she realized she couldn't move her hands...Nor her feet.

Looking down, she blinked a few times before gasping, her eyes widening as she saw the shackles on her feet. She let out a cry of help as she panicked and started to struggle. Only to find that this was happening to no avail. It was then that a soothing voice hit her ears; soothing, but agonizing at the same time. Any voice at this point was good, but when she heard the words, "It's no use..." a little hope inside of her died.

"What are we doing here..." She said, panting a little bit before looking over...The owner of this voice, a man, was standing, looking at her from behind glasses. The light was hitting them just right so that she couldn't see his gleeful eyes, but she could still tell from his smile that he was the one who brought her here.

"Oh, I thought we'd have tea, maybe a little lunch, and some laughs later on," he said, a hint of sarcasm in his voice before he picked up a syringe, looking at the liquid within, "Surely you've seen this before in a movie; the mad doctor who ties up the girl and does all sorts of crazy expiriments? Yea, you're living it."

Shiori's jaw dropped as he said this; all of it. He was so cocky and confident. There was surely someone who would save her! Right...? He struggled now, as if her life depended on it, "Let me go, you fucking psycho!"

He just laughed and walked over to a table, mixing some liquids, "Oh, of course mistress. While I'm at it, let me call the police for you!" He shook his head as he walked over to her, pressing a needle to her skin, "I'd stop moving if I were you. If you move too much, I might miss the vein, and you COULD very easily die.."

Her face became pale as he said this, her whole body freezing, and in the same moment it froze, he pushed the needle deep into her skin, the liquids filling her vein and having an instant sedative effect, her breathing slowing as her eyes drooped. She was just panting now, feeling as if she just ran a marathon, her whole body was warm. Unwillingly, she cooed out a soft moan, the warmth was feeling better now, her heart pumping harder, faster now. She could hear laughing in the back of her mind, but it didn't strike her at all what it could be anymore, her head was too focussed on the growing pleasure taking over her body. Her hands moved down to her breasts, slowly massaging them. Panic should have filled her mind but no; instead it was all pleasure as they started ballooning in her hands, the nipples getting hard, then wet, milk soaking her cute white t-shirt. She moaned as she heard a ripping noise, her shirt no longer able to handle her breasts as it ripped up the middle.

She slid a hand down her panties, just now realizing she was free, but a blush taking her face over as she was too deep in pleasure to care that she could run. She dipped a finger into her wet pussy, moaning as her claw...Claw? She managed to look down at her hand that was still playing with her dripping breasts through a straining bra to see a fur covered hand. Ok, so that was weird, and she slowly started to come out of her sex-craving daze...At least, she was before the man put a hand on her other breast and started massaging it, while slowly licking the dripping nipple. She moaned deeper now as the fur trickled up her arm slowly, out of the corner of her eye she could see him crawling on top of him. She gasped at the feeling, his legs were strangely slimy, and an odd color...was he alright? He had pushed off her pants and panties before she could protest, but she didn't care anymore, her clawed hand ripping off the bra that was holding her breasts in.

They jiggled as they escaped their prison, another moan coming from her throat as this man licked the one she was playing with, the fur up her neck now. She could feel his mouth sucking up her liquids, her hand holding the breast still for him, and at the same time her ears slowly moved up to the top of her head. He reached up for a moment, growling out her pleasure as she felt them end in a tip. She used this hand to push his face deeper into her breast, a DD and still growing breast that was, his hand still massaging her other one, and his other hand massaging...Another one? She slid her hand up her body and moaned loudly as it brushed against a new nipple, a fourth one below her original set. The copper colored fur was almost to her feet now, her face had been pushed out into a muzzle and--what WAS wrong with his legs? They felt like they had no bones in them anymore...She looked down, tongue hanging out her mouth as she panted from the sensual feeling she was going through, and watched first as her shoes just fell apart, pointed claws replacing her feet. She wanted to scream, but she couldn't, she was enjoying this too much to do so. Secondly, however, she saw that the man's legs were changed too, both of them had split into five each, four of the ten were holding her legs down while four more were massaging her breasts, his hands moving to her neck, rubbing it sensually as the last two...Oh, she couldn't believe the feeling they were giving her. As they were slimy, they were well lubricated, and he was probing her pussy and her ass with them. She had to fight off the orgasm that she was sure was coming soon...

[Wulfen]

kinda short but nice

Ah, thank you. ^^; I wasn't trying to make it very long, just enough to get the transformations down..

[Arthax]

The scenes were hot, and the story was overall well-written. I liked it. A good first-stab, Syrean.

Thank you very much, Arthax. I'll give it a more story-like approach next time, though, instead of straight up TF --> Sex. >.>

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Not to be any more of a pedant than usual but that's not a story - it's a scene. My advice is that if you want to cut your teeth writing like this, you should hit the addventure... Not the most user friendly place in the world... and I suppose here you get better feedback, that'll come with having software that is over a decade old, I suppose.

It can be fun to tease/please girls by writing scenes - a crime of which I am most certainly guilty - but it''s best to do proper stories... plot, characterisation and all that jazz.

Indeed. Which is kinda why I said storyishthing. ^^; Thank you for the input, however.