New BE story i started

[drlaimer]

Originally Posted by blazing_dragon

I've tried to add to your story, but in all reality, I'm just stuck. Is there anything that you're looking for that I might be able to write?

Yeah would be great if you add something after chapter 2 Go for a walk with the dog... Would be very happy if you use the glowing mushroom or the liquid. You could make BE, PE, Transformation or Shrinking (please no transgender, furry, gay or hermaphrodites) out of it i dont know... and i would be very happy if you make it not that "cruel" for the main charakter as in your last chapter (i dont want to insult your writing, its great) but he is the main charakter and he should have the fun So stick on him, please.
Last but not least I am begging you to tell me how I can make my story "more famous" because nobody writes something into it except you