Short story BE

[tetsumi]

Thanks everyone! It's always great to hear feedback, of both kinds. Critiques will help me improve, and compliments will keep me fueled for more! I'll be writing more as I have the time and opportunity, I promise, though it might take me a few weeks, as I just started back to school and started a brand-new, full-time job. Nevertheless, porn is motivating.

Thanks for your viewpoints there, Prof. I think I remember you saying in another thread somewhere that you weren't much of a fan of the "fluid" thing, and I'm sorry, but I kinda like it myself. But, if it didn't ruin the story for you, then wonderful!

This was kind of a quick story to test the waters here on this board. I'll try to flesh out the next one a bit better and possibly explore some other options or directions. Who knows, I might even give a hint at a reason for the change! Haha, we'll see.

Thanks again for your support, and if everyone can just hang tight for a little, I'll have another one up whenever I find the time!