My Writing

Mr GorpThorp · 10-15-2008

A good start for an author- my advice would be to refrain from using the more juvenile breast terminologies during narration (like boobies) unless the character is speaking the word. Also feel free to make them longer, you have some good stories that you could stretch the plot out some on. Time allowing, of course. I'm interested to read more...

10-15-2008	#5
Mr GorpThorp Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 402	Re: My Writing A good start for an author- my advice would be to refrain from using the more juvenile breast terminologies during narration (like boobies) unless the character is speaking the word. Also feel free to make them longer, you have some good stories that you could stretch the plot out some on. Time allowing, of course. I'm interested to read more... __________________ Gorp. Thorp.