My short stories - transformation

[Amahain]

Originally Posted by blackvelvetrpg

Quikkies good for a quick rise but not commentworthy for the intelectuals
who visit this place.

I thought this whole forum was about quick rises.

Anyway, nice story Tetsumi.

[blackvelvetrpg]

Originally Posted by Amahain

I thought this whole forum was about quick rises.

Perhaps but since the writer keeps asking for reader response,am I supposed
to provide commentary on the "quick rise' that presumably went with the
story?

If the forum is all about the quick rise," nice story","write mooore","OMG purrfect" etc take on entirely new meanings not related to
grammar,spelling ,plot,setting and character development
and probably have more to do with
pistle length,orgasm,etc

We'd be dealing with Devil Donkey's
"Jerk Off" Meter of years past that was supposed to be used to
rate new transformation literature

[Amahain]

Correct me if I'm wrong (and I don't mean that in a patronising way - I really might be wrong here), but you seemed to imply that erotic stories and well written stories are mutually exclussive, and so it makes no sense to critique an erotic story for its style. I don't think this is the case. A well written erotic story is going to have more of an effect on its readers than a poorly written one, and so style is still important, and it makes sense that a writer like Tetsumi would be asking for constructive criticism.