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Process Disciple
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 1,494
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Re: Irony
All right the Transformation seems fine, but kind of short too, I mean really short. Story's all right too.
Edit: What you need is more detail on the transformation, IF the transformation part of the story is actually your goal/key point in that story. |
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