New AR Comic "A Tale of Two Sisters"

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by thetribescribe

I agree with SdazVarence. I feel sorry for Lauren too, and that's a credit to the art of storytelling. You're making us care about your characters!

I'm willing to pay for a Part 2 for poor Lauren. Anyone with me?

Hey thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you got into the characters. I could go on writing Betsy & Lauren stuff forever, and Betsy always seems to get the short end of the stick (it's Betsy that gets Ar'ed so I figure that's who you are referring to).

The problem now is sales - I just haven't sold enough of "Tale of Two Sisters" to recoup my costs, so it's kind of hard to justify doing another one. I might do it at a loss anyway, but then again maybe people might prefer to see other AR situations with new characters?

[kuenbu]

LMAO!!! The newspaper was the Dailey Bugle!! And Steve Rogers and Logan were on the front page!! Nice touch. That got a good laugh out of me! Okay as for my review, I am a growth and an AP lovin' gal. So wish the Lauren's growth were a tad bit more detailed. However her end result was NICE! I see you lean more to AR. Anyway we can get a little more AP from you in the future?

Don't get me wrong. It was a great comic. Well worth the money.

[jimroberts]

Originally Posted by Piper

Curiously, Lauren's red-haired beach friend seems to regress with her.

Or is the later friend the first friend's little sister?

That was my question as well. Luckily, the early friend is in only one scene, so I imagined her hair to be different, and voila - little sister is a red head with pony tails, original friend has red hair but not in pony tails.

Problem solved. (you could just say they are different girls, but they just looked WAY too close to the same, so my mind's eye gives the first one a different hair-do.)

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hey it looks nice ^^