Finally gonna draw something

DevonCory · 04-14-2009

@NFM
I think it's a good start. Practice makes perfect and since this is one of your early work, it ain't half bad. Probably better than what many of the critiques around can come up with.

That being said, the character's look very stiff. Her posture isn't bad, but it certainly lack dynamism. Proportions are fine, except for the hands and forearms. Those however, with the feet, are probably the hardest to draw correctly anyway.

Keep it up!

Ryu_Knight · 04-14-2009

hmm, its a good start but what I think a lot of people are trying to say is thats its just too flat and needs more deph to it, it looks like you ran her over with a steam roller and scaned that. like I said its a good start and you can only get better from here

I see you put her arm over her one breast but you didn't do anything to the breast or arm, you jsut threw it over top and just left that, wheres the squish of the arm on her breast since they are so large that puttung her arm on it wll put a dent in them

like people have said work on your proportions, study other artest styles, look at real people, find a few how to draw books for tips[I suggest how to draw manga-female characters] if you want to see how your just only gonna get better you can check out my DA page and see how I've grown in drawing

http://knightshadowx.deviantart.com/

so just keep trying and ignor any bad or mean comments from people, make some friends who will support you, if you listen to waht we are saying to and learn and get better your bond to find yourself a fan base here

04-14-2009	#1
DevonCory Frequent Poster Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 282	Re: Finally gonna draw something @NFM I think it's a good start. Practice makes perfect and since this is one of your early work, it ain't half bad. Probably better than what many of the critiques around can come up with. That being said, the character's look very stiff. Her posture isn't bad, but it certainly lack dynamism. Proportions are fine, except for the hands and forearms. Those however, with the feet, are probably the hardest to draw correctly anyway. Keep it up! __________________ My opinions, not yours.

04-14-2009	#2
Ryu_Knight Chop, Chop, Chop, Chop Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 547	Re: Finally gonna draw something hmm, its a good start but what I think a lot of people are trying to say is thats its just too flat and needs more deph to it, it looks like you ran her over with a steam roller and scaned that. like I said its a good start and you can only get better from here I see you put her arm over her one breast but you didn't do anything to the breast or arm, you jsut threw it over top and just left that, wheres the squish of the arm on her breast since they are so large that puttung her arm on it wll put a dent in them like people have said work on your proportions, study other artest styles, look at real people, find a few how to draw books for tips[I suggest how to draw manga-female characters] if you want to see how your just only gonna get better you can check out my DA page and see how I've grown in drawing http://knightshadowx.deviantart.com/ so just keep trying and ignor any bad or mean comments from people, make some friends who will support you, if you listen to waht we are saying to and learn and get better your bond to find yourself a fan base here