04-28-2009 | #25 |
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Re: Amahain's Stories
I'll consider it. I'm working on some other things right now, but I wouldn't mind making improvements to it some time in the future. I'll PM you before I repost it, if I repost it. Thanks!
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Re: Amahain's Stories
I don't know if this would be kind of inappropriate, but I was thinking about the ending of the werewolf story and had an idea for a continuation of it. Would you mind terribly if I wrote it?
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05-07-2009 | #27 |
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Re: Amahain's Stories
I was actually thinking of changing it completely, but if you think you can improve the story by tacking a bit more onto the end, then I'm all for it.
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05-14-2009 | #28 |
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Re: Amahain's Stories
Next two chapters of Inanna's Demons are up. I'll be away this weekend, so I won't be responding to any comments until Monday - I'm not ignoring anybody.
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05-18-2009 | #29 |
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Re: Amahain's Stories
And they're good!
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05-18-2009 | #30 |
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Re: Amahain's Stories
I liked the new chapters. Especially the part where she tried to just remember her name but ultimately still got taken over completely.
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05-18-2009 | #31 |
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Re: Amahain's Stories
Thank you both!
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05-21-2009 | #32 |
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Re: Amahain's Stories
I liked the new stories! I look forward to seeing other kinds of demon monsters! What about some reptile or insect monsters?
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05-21-2009 | #33 |
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Re: Amahain's Stories
Reptile or insect monsters, eh? Sounds good. I'll keep those in mind.
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05-22-2009 | #34 |
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Re: Amahain's Stories
The new chapters got a nice story twist. I like that you introduced some adversaries for Innana's crew, that offers the story more possibilites
than being just a TF fest. ( Not that there is something wrong with a traditional, nice TF fest ) If you want a suggestion for some new forms of TF, i think goats would fit very nicely. they're pretty traditional, if you want to show some bestial sexual urges. Anyway, a nice series. I'm looking forward to the next part.
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*shivers* No goats please, CYOC has turned me off of those FOREVER!
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05-22-2009 | #36 | |
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something tells me i don't want to dig further into the matter. Thankfully i'm not all too familiar with CYOC's various literary outpourings... I just thought of it as an idea, based on those ancient images of goatish demons and fiends. Well, its Amahain's story, he should write it the way he prefers it, of course.
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