New TF Story

hmmm! · 07-23-2009

A couple new forms for Mary, and some pretty important things happening in the story!

I really dig how the form Mary was sprinting in got that itch from standing still. Like it needed to be in movement badly enough to where it tingled if it wasn't in motion. Nice little detail, that.

I rather enjoy what Katie did to the apartment while Mary was out. It's fun imagining her trying to build all of that and likely making a wreck of it at first.

And man, Mary really gave it to Shandra there at the end, and there's a good mix of feeling sorry for her and feeling angry with her at the same time there.

Prime stuff. Always a joy, Soy!

07-23-2009	#11
hmmm! Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 417	Re: New TF Story A couple new forms for Mary, and some pretty important things happening in the story! I really dig how the form Mary was sprinting in got that itch from standing still. Like it needed to be in movement badly enough to where it tingled if it wasn't in motion. Nice little detail, that. I rather enjoy what Katie did to the apartment while Mary was out. It's fun imagining her trying to build all of that and likely making a wreck of it at first. And man, Mary really gave it to Shandra there at the end, and there's a good mix of feeling sorry for her and feeling angry with her at the same time there. Prime stuff. Always a joy, Soy! __________________ My Deviantart Account: http://spiralingstaircase.deviantart.com/