Shrinking Script

[LOD]

I would definitely love to see any further adventures of these two ^^

[Nom Anor]

Originally Posted by liveordie83

I would definitely love to see any further adventures of these two ^^

You might. I may try to develop this as a comic at some point down the road.

[talon6419]

LUV the way this script ran through my head!

As far as feedback, the scene where her pants and undies finally loose purchase, and is replaced by her shirt tail. If you're adverse to nudity okay, BUT if not, but you still don't want frontal nudity, how about just a brief little tush shot before the shirt tail drops, as a not amused Renee smirks.


tal

[Nom Anor]

Originally Posted by talon6419

LUV the way this script ran through my head!

As far as feedback, the scene where her pants and undies finally loose purchase, and is replaced by her shirt tail. If you're adverse to nudity okay, BUT if not, but you still don't want frontal nudity, how about just a brief little tush shot before the shirt tail drops, as a not amused Renee smirks.


tal

Glad you liked it.

I'm still interested in developing this as a comic, so we'll see how things progress.

[gladewalker]

Well done!

I've thought about even doing audio scripts too. The cute little voices would be adorable and sometimes it's worth leaving things up to the imagination ;-)