My first try.

Chameo · 03-23-2010

from a critiquing standpoint, Its a good first try, I agree with most of whats being said, but on the face, there is a line below the lips i believe you put in to kind of show where the chin meets the end of the mouth, but the way its portrayed, you've got a bit of a double chin look. If you wanted to show this better, id have the skin reach out and connect to the lips rather than just throwing in the line.

03-23-2010	#1
Chameo Process Fan Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 77	Re: My first try. from a critiquing standpoint, Its a good first try, I agree with most of whats being said, but on the face, there is a line below the lips i believe you put in to kind of show where the chin meets the end of the mouth, but the way its portrayed, you've got a bit of a double chin look. If you wanted to show this better, id have the skin reach out and connect to the lips rather than just throwing in the line.